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The day after tomorrow chapter eleven
They soon arrive outside Tina’s apartment so she kisses Bette on the cheek and bids her goodnight before retreating indoors.
Bette watches her and makes sure Tina gets inside the block door safely. As she is preparing to drive off Bette notices that Tina has left her bag, so gets out of her car, locks the door and hurries inside to catch up with Tina.
‘T, wait, T hang on’ Bette shouts breathlessly.
Tina turns around and sees Bette.
‘What is it? Oh I forgot my bag, thanks for bringing it in’ Tina takes the bag that is in Bette’s extended hand.
They both touch hands for longer than necessary loving the feel of each others soft skin.
‘Do you wanna come in?’ Tina asked shyly.
‘Of course I do, I mean yeah that would be great’ Bette said.
Bette followed Tina into her apartment enjoying the view of Tina’s swaying hips.
As soon as they were inside Tina kicked her heels off and sighed at the pleasure of being barefoot after such a long evening.
They went into the kitchen as Tina was going to make them a nightcap.
Soon after they were sitting at the dining table drinking and occasionally watching each other when they thought they wouldn’t get caught.
Tina reached over and stroked Bette’s face with her thumb ‘You are so beautiful’ she said with a look of wonder on her face.
‘So are you’ Bette replied leaning over to kiss her on the cheek. ‘Even with soup all down your dress’ Bette couldn’t help but laugh.
‘Well are you gonna help me out of this dress then?’ Tina teased before continuing ‘This zip on the back is really hard to undo by myself’.
‘Well, if you need my help then of course I will help you’ Bette said now looking quite flustered.
Tina just smiles, takes Bette’s hand in hers and takes her into her bedroom.
Bette is looking slightly bewildered bit happy as she allows herself to be pulled into Tina’s bedroom.
Suddenly Tina stops and turns around so her back is towards Bette ‘Undo me please sweetie’ Tina asks sweetly.
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(37 votes, average: 3.84 out of 5)
Boy, and did you EVER take the chance to write! ;)
Let’s get it on is RIGHT! Whew!
Great :D Love it, post soon
WOW!!!! THAt was just Great. Thanks PPS
Damn, Tina sure does seem to be a fast learner. We’ll take every bit you can give us. But school always comes first.
WOW… very nice… you did a great job… now i can’t wait to see how bette tops that…continue when you can
I am always behind so when I do catch up I have at least 3 to 4 chapters to read. Boy did this one send my temperature level into the fever zone. For someone who had never been with a woman Tina sure took care of Bette.
Excellent job! Can’t wait for more!
hotttttttttttttttttttttttt longer
I’m sorry I don’t get a chance to comment on each chapter but, they are one right after another and I must read them all then comment. You did a marvelous job with this last chapter. Tina learns fast and seems to enjoy much. She will never go back and she is hooked forver on that beauty Bette. Great chapters. Thanks. Study now. We don’t want to intefere with your studies.
Excellent job on this chapter. I love the story. And love to see Tina take a little control. Way to go, tina!
Wow…yes Tina is a fast learner…but she had the right formula…Do what you would like to have done to you…can’t go wrong with that equation…EVER! I love this story. As long as we aren’t keeping you from important school work it’s all good kiddo. You know we are all gonna want to see your grades to make sure we aren’t interfering with school…lol. You have a bunch of mother hens keeping an eye on you….lol. Keep posting we love it!
Amazing that Tina took the lead since this was her 1st time… kinda reminds me of me (1st) an my ex. Guess this means Bette will get to repay Tina.
dams….that’s finger lick’n good.
Damn that was hot!!!!!!!!!!!