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The girl next door…chapter 10
Bette: actually Tina.im not into men..Im a *****.(Bette braced herself.)
Tina: (staring.then looking at her beer bottle..then staring at everyone again)
Marina: Tina.honey we all are
Tina: WHAT.ALL OF YOUFUCK ME
Alice smiled.(yip my dear tartan piece of shortbread. thats what we were all thinking)
Tina stood up and said.
TBC
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Tina: bloody *****…….would you credit it………my husband….Eric….Mr *****…but can’t use it……….told my parents I was a ***** because we didn’t have ***** anymore!! …***** its is a small world………… (Tina was in full swing and the bud was taking cntrol)…
Bette sat with her mouth on the deck…
Bette: so ….are you then……….
Tina: (turning to Bette saying)… och…I dont know…….dont want another ***** near me never mind inside me thats for sure……bloody useless things…..aren’t they…? (Tina looked at everyone then stopped at Bette…)
The gang stared at Bette… Bette swallowed hard and bit her lip………..
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(53 votes, average: 3.28 out of 5)
Yes I know the look, my daughters say a big hi ya to everyone out there. Thanks for comments
i love it!! can’t wait for more.
I’m sat here laughing myself silly, I think my girl and brothers are about ready to commit me (not to mention the “my mummy is insane” look my daughter is giving me). This is brilliant chick.
Ok this is so fabulous! Scotland – Love your dialogue and story. Thanks so much for writing. WOW! 5 bright stars to you! Please write another chapter very soon.
Bloody tease!
ok bette needs to stop drooling just long enough to tell tina she will take her up on the offer from the previous chapter, when tina said “f*ck me!” can’t wait for the next one. thanks for taking the time to write! :D
am loving it… but ya gotta stop teasin us girl.. nice job can’t wait for more!!!
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD…YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The chiffhander tease from Scotland. that was a greatstory. This Tina is more open and a little rough arounf the edges. Adifferent Tina. Thanks for this chapter.
this is gettin really good ……Poor Bette shes in the spotlight again….good updates!!!!!
You are such a tease with short chapters like this.
you’re catching on the “tease disease”
you are a tease!
Can’t get enough of this story…can you make them a little longer…by the time I sink in for a fun read…the story is over. More soon please.
So very funny. Love these short chapters–quick and to the point. I have been LOL catching up with your chapters tonight. Thanks for the merriment!
god, i simply LOVE this story . thanx so much . Pls keep writing