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The Insatiable Duo (part 23)
"That’s so gross T," Bette pouted, shaking her hands in the air before taking a seat on the bed, "He’s like a brother to me."
Tina grinned at Bette’s discomfort, "Are you sure it’s not just because he has a penis?"
"Uhhh!" Bette huffed, getting up from the bed again and walking out of the room. "You’re gross," she said over her shoulder.
Tina chuckled to herself, but she knew she’d have to make it up to Bette. She felt bad, but she sometimes found it funny how uncomfortable Bette was with men. Tina wasn’t uncomfortable about the subject of men – as long as she didn’t have to see them naked she was fine – but Bette was always disgusted.
"Babe?" Tina asked, grabbing a shirt to put on before walking out into the hall. "Bette? I’m sorry," she called out, "Where are you?"
Bette was shaking her head, standing in the bathroom and leaning over the sink. Tina smiled at the sight but reminded herself to be sensitive.
"Baby?"
"Why would you even say the word penis when we’re being intimate? Eew Tina. Really eew."
Tina bit back her smile. "I know hunny," she said quietly, walking in beside Bette.
"Don’t," Bette said back, swallowing hard.
Tina stood a foot back and saw the insecurities Bette must be dealing with. "I’m really sorry baby. I forgot how much you hate it."
Bette shrugged and looked up to her, "Is … that what you …"
Tina tilted her head in amusement, frowning quickly when she saw the real concern in Bette’s eyes. "No! No, Bette. Babe … aww hunny." She walked up to Bette with a smile and threw her arms around her. "Aww."
Bette sighed and closed her eyes at the contact.
"Baby, you know I love women," she chuckled, squeezing Bette in her arms. "Aww hunny."
"Please don’t mention that when I’m making love to you," Bette said quietly and Tina melted with her tone. She brought her head down to see Bette’s expression. The brunette’s honesty was breaking her heart.
"Aww baby," Tina said softly, "I love you so much and I’m sorry I was insensitive."
No matter how silly she thought it was, that look on Bette’s face was enough to understand and try to make her feel better. She loved her so much that even if Bette was a little sensitive at times, she didn’t mind. She was just happy she could make her feel better.
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(43 votes, average: 3.65 out of 5)
i have a huge smile on my face right now i just love this story!
You have quite the imagination….XXX rated. I hope your RL is as delicious as your story. :-)
So good to hear that you are feeling better. A really bad cold is a nasty thing, it can take so long to feel better sometimes. Great update. It was poignant for me how Tina was consciously able to give up control and maybe more so on how Bette was so tender and understanding with Tina’s vulnerability.
this is my favorite story you write, how you pair these two up in this story is electric, my computer almost smokes when reading this one!!luv it!!!
Loved it! Glad you are back.
give a little recieve alot…Lesson for Tina
Again well done! I’ve missed your stories I always feel so happy after reading:) PPS
Damn that was HOT and then so sweet & tender:) PPS
what a great way to end the day for me, coming home from work to find this and other awesome stories. Thanks for the post.
Bi, if this is what we got while you were ill, I can imagine what this chapter would have been if you weren’t ill. 12 alarm fire. Damn girl…….. Maybe Bette should have more control in their love-making. Glad you’re well. PPVVVVVS
Ok, that’s nice for a change, but please don’t “oversissify” Tina..!
love how they are showing some vulnerability with each other. awesome update! PPS!
Jeezus…had to get off floor for a cold shower and a cigarette. ROFLMAO!
Ohhhh so adorable!! LOVED IT!!! Your writing is amazing!!! You’re realy talented!!! PPVVVS!!!
I love their foreplay, during play and after play. These two are so cute and lovable. I am with Bette, there is no need to mention a male’s anatomy protrusion.
I just caught up and I love them!! Great job!! I love Tina and Bette together. =) PPS!!
You’re alive! :P Glad you’re feeling better, I had the flu a few months back and it SUCKED. Awesome chapter as always, really like the way you’ve written these two :) So cute at the end! Much love ;)
Can this story get any hotter! Wow! What an update and was so sweet how Tina gave up control to Bette and Bette was all tender cause she knew hard it was for Tina. Love it love it. Thank you:)
So glad you are feeling better! As usual what an update! So sweet,loving and yet again another huge hurdle crossed. So glad Tina was able to give up control – that was a huge step! These two are just breaking down all the barriers! I love your stories they always leave me so happy! Can’t wait for the next chapter and the next… PPS
awww…
“oh happy dayyyyy” – you’re back bi…it’s been too long!! i’ve missed this story it always makes me smile…now i’m off to read timid devotion, pps…oh and glad to hear you’re feelin better…does that mean more chappys????!
Oh my goodness! that was wow!:)PPS
I think it’s important for Tina to realize that she can give some control to Bette to balance things. Great update to this great story! Thanks for posting!
YEAH!!!! and i bet u didn’t try my recipe [big smile]. thx, loved tina’s giving up control.
I love this story!!!! Thank you PPVS
everytime the posts seem shorter and shorter… :(i realy realy live your tibette so ppvssssss i cant wait till the gang will mww3t tina
What a coincidence that I am sick too…I have followed your stories for awhile, I just haven’t commented yet, but I wanted to say I enjoy your stories very much-it’s the best I have read.
That was hot and awesome, love it. PPS!