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The Long and Winding Road chp 47
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“And I have a woman in my bed that has always been the one – she has always been the missing part of me. All the pain has paid off because I belong to Tina again “
“And tonight she gets to claim you back ? “ Helena said slyly grinning at Bette.
“How did you know ? “
“Well Tina did tell me that Danny had put on a pound and a half in six weeks and six is the magic number – – you got the all clear – am I right ?”
“You are right “
“How have you lasted six weeks ? “
“I have absolutely no idea how either of us have lasted. I have been making love to her a lot “
“Doesn’t that make it worse ?”
“Yes and no “
Someone knocked at the door – they both got up and Helena lifted Danny out of his stroller and they went back into the house. It was Shane
“Hey there “
“I just popped by to say that I’ll be late but I will definitely be here by 7:30 – got some errands “
A car door slammed and they both turned to the sound. A few seconds later Henry stormed down the path
“Oh shit “ Bette cursed
“I think I better hang around “ Shane said
“Thanks – Helena’s here as well but I’d appreciate the support “
“Where the hell is that bitch ? “
“What the hell are you doing here ? “ Bette demanded
“Come to see that whore “
Bette had feared this moment – it was clear Henry had found out about Tina being pregnant.
“You better come in “ Bette wanted Helena and Shane to witness this but not the entire neighbourhood.
Helena emerged from the bedroom after putting Danny into his crib and glared at the clearly irate man – this was going to get ugly. But with three pretty tough fighters in Bette, Shane and here against him he didn’t have a cat in hells chance.
Helena was a firm believer in the all conquering potential of empowered women – and Henry had already picked a fight when the three most robust dykes she could name were against him. Poor bastard.
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You are brilliant you and Skipton are my 2 favourite writers, when I say that I cant decide who is the best writer, have many writers who I am soooo happy to see have posted but you girls are my best, with Skip not posting as much these days, well I get excited when you post. When I am at work I hope when I come home you have posted If you have not I get upset, until you do. As I said to Skip if I won the lottery I would put you in to puiblishing so you could realise a book, you are that good. No disrepect to the other writers I love all the stories I read. The long & winding love, could alway read always think about it, keep going forever, but the L Wing want a to read at least 6 chapters every day, if not at least 2 books a weeks, bring on my lottery numbers Jo xxxxxx
That wasw so PERFECT!!!!! Thank you Ally
You are the one author I always check on to see if another chapter is posted. Thank you for all you creativity, time and effort. Do you post each chapter as soon as you complete it ? Or do you get in the flow of writing and knock off several chapters at a time?
I like both your stories so just keep posting and I will keep reading. Thanks a bunch ally.
I’m with Dainty, can u please have Tina arrive home again, cut Henry out of the picture of course!!!!I love both stories Ally so whichever you’re inspired to write will do but I don’t want either to end…I want to know about our girlz in England and our girlz in the White House and even later in their lives so as long as your creativity flows please feel free to continue…
And it’s all on videotape….YES!!! Henry the ass getting kicked around by the girls is AWESOME! You were right. This is a great chapter! Thank You, Ally.
First! Woohoo! I never am!Gonna go read now…. thanks for the update alley!
OMG!!!!That was a FAN-F*CKIN-TASTIC chapter!!! I laughed so hard!! So perfect!!!! Go Alley!!!!!!!
Great chapter Alley, I look forward to many more of this story as well as L Wing, I am with you won’t watch the programme tonight, too depressing. Prefer to read your story instead.
AllyE that was just great. But I really wanted Bette to slug him one and the rest to join in and beat the crap out of him.He would have been toast. YES, PLEASE DO GO ON WITH THIS STORY, WE WILL READ AS LONG AS YOU WANT TO WRITE. I see a very long association with this story and happy that you are making that offer to us. GO ON, WRITE SOMEMORE. Now back to this chapter, hopefully, (really you must) you are going to let Tina enter the house again with the roses for Bette and let them start their date off right without the spoilsport presence of Hen-dick in the house. Start this date off right. I want to see you describe that silver dress again, with her hair up, describe the shoes and the love showing in her eyes for one Ms. Bette Porter-Kennard. Date chapter next, please pretty please. Thanks for such a wonderful story.
Definitely want more of this fic. Take all the time u need. Stopping at 50 would have been cruel anyway.
I was thinking Henry deserved a good swift kick in the nuts, but he’s such a sorry, insensate bastard, they’ve probably shrivled up and and retreated into his abodomen and it wouldn’t make much difference where he was kicked. I suspect Danny of having the bigger, more functional pair even at his young age. Henry may have to settle for a blood test. Won’t matter anyway.
RFLMFAOOOOOOO…….AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME…….DONT WE ALL WISH WE COULD DO THAT TO SOME MAN……….GOSH, I LOVE THIS FIC……AMAZING….CONTINUE SOON……
Damn, Henry is such a dick, and a bad dick at that. Bring on as many chapters of the L-Wing and Long and Winding Road as you want, Ally. I never tire of your stories.
i hope henry just goes away! love the chapter glad the 6 weeks are over. I like both stories, but if you are taking votes, i vote l wing.
Forget to say previously, I like this Helena (even though I am not a fan of hers, but the way to u write her I can get over that) so please let her find her happiness with Ruth. I love to read how that comes about for her. Also, Alice needs some love to or maybe a BABY!!!! What do u think?????
Good chappie Ally, Henry should stop while he is behind. If he ever cared about Tina, he wouldn’t want to upset her in her condition. Hey Henry put up or shut up ie squirt in a cup and shut up :o)
That was brilliant. Please some more soon as I am really enjoying this story. Thanks.
Oh my God! Hahaha the sex tips, the pool and the camcorder. Genius! I am crying with laughter here, thanks for the great chapter
WOW Ally, this chapter was beyond fantastic and you know just how much I enjoyed it—especially a certain little part. Thanks babe it was worth the wait. You asked for a show of hands if we wanted you to continue this story longer than you planned and I for one am holding up both of my hands. Also, you wanted to know which story we wanted you to post a chapter of next. Well, either one of them will due just fine because I can’t get enough of either story. Ally, as you know tonight I am going out for the first time on a date with a woman and I just wanted to thank you for helping me reach this stage in my life. You are the best my dear best friend.
I had both hands in the air but then I realized I wouldn’t be able to type, of course this story should continue. I hope that is the end of Henry. And please…please…please don’t let Tina be mistaken and those girls are his. Hopefully Henry will take into consideration the tips given to him and will go on to have a fairly successful love life…lol
Post as many chapters of Long and Winding as you like! I love this story, BUT I really really really want to know what’s going to happen in The LWing!
This is some funny shit!! Henry is a putz. The Fantastic Four are more studly than Henry, fo’ sure.
im showing my hands here….lol please post soon ally… love this women..
this stupid man just never learns, how can tina survive with him for a year…he’d better back out and leave them alone…btw, my hand is up
AWESOME as always…please update this story, as I’m looking forward to a real sexy NC17….
OMG! LMAO! That was so much fun! Henry sure got what he deserved. :)) Well, Ally i would prefer you continuing with this story as long as you like … maybe another 100 chapters? ;-) Coz, i just love this and L wing!
WOW, the was some DYKE KICKING ASS chapter. In one sense it is good that Henry finds out that Tina is not carrying his seed so that later on he can not take her to court or whatever. I do hope that they will still go to England but now that Henry knows he may force them to stay in LA. I am happy that you are going to add more chapters than the original 50. I really love this story and look forward to it everytime that you post a chapter. My vote for the next chapter would be this story.
Is Henry an idiot? in how many ways B&T have to tell him that he is not the father of that beautiful twins and that he is so lost in the sexual arts! i think he deserve to have more pain but maybe i am bad person sorry! but he wasn’t nice with Tina nor Bette or any lesbian person! About the next chapter may i vote for one chapter for L wing and another chapter for the long… two more please is weekend and you won’t watch the show in the night! give us some happy times don’t you think? ;)
“Apart from my blonde wife between my thighs making her tongue do the talking ? ” And her fingers doing the walking? HOOOOOOOOOOMAN! Both hands up in the air shoutin’ “Hallelujah, Amen!” You know I like this story a bit more than “L Wing” so definitely continue for as long as you want. Continue both, start a new one, start 10 new ones. Whatever, I’m there, girlie!
HELL YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is fucking awesome and love it. I agree with jb621, henry is stupid but lucky to be kicked by hot and sexy women and he should keep that amazing moment with him for the rest of his life and never bother them again. Ok post soon please, thanks!
God that made me happy. presidential elections are on their way in France (my home land) and those homophobic morons are just pissing me off. That was good! Thanks a lot!