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The Real Deal Ch5
”I am so sorry, honey. I will make it up to you. Come here…” I brush her fringe aside and pull her head towards me gently. I kiss her with a bit for force than usual, I want to kiss hers and my pain away.
“Cat…”
“Yeah…” She is out of breath from the kiss.
“Do you mind if I see her again? For closure, I never get one from her. But if you mind then I won’t see her again.” I say honestly.
“You don’t have to ask me, just do what you have to do and come back to me. I am here always.” She smiles again.
“Thank you.”
“You’re welcome. Now, I think it’s time for you to make it up to me.” She glances at the bedroom.
“My pleasure…Why not here?” I raise an eyebrow and lean in for another kiss with passion this time.
I pull her into my lap, holding her like a baby. My hands are working on taking her t-shirt off. My mouth sucks on one of her nipples and alternate between licking her nipple in circular motion with my tongue and sucking it.
She giggles and moans at the same time. “That feels so fucking good…ar…”
“em… nice breasts…“ I use one arm to hold her in the position and my other free hand to massage her other breasts.
“ar…. You are killing me…” She moans louder.
“Take you pants off…” I said when I switch my attention to another nipple.
I move one hand to caress her stomach. She shivers at the contact of my touch.
“Do you want more?” I look up to see her face.
“Please… Carmen.” She whispers.
I am pleased that how easily she can be turned on by me. I can feel her wetness building rapidly. My fingers are teasing her around the centre. Her arms are wrapped around my head, pressing my head against her breasts, begging me to suck and lick harder.
Her hips are moving up and down slightly urging me to fulfil her desires. Her breathing is getting shorter and quicker by the minute.
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(27 votes, average: 3.41 out of 5)
Hey Catseye, great update… please continue. That little skit between Jenny and Alice depicting Shane and Carmen was hilarious. I loved it….Shane obviously appreciated it also. Keep it coming. PPS.
THANKS CATSEYE… =) I REALLY APPRECIATED=)
Fuckin’ awesome!!! Baby-girl, dis tomboi wants mo . . . and she want mo NOW!!! LMFAO!!! Whelp, anyways, like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!
Please please please post an update soon!!! I can’t wait…
that was super funny
i love this fic and yor writing , but i must admit it is really hard to read carmen with anyone else but shane they really belong together, maybe i hope you might consider the two of them working it out….pleaseeeeeee
hi , great story. Where have you been though??????It’s been too long , eberybody is waiting for you to post the rest of your sory!!!!!Dont let us down , pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!