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Thief of my heart – chapter 1
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’You would go to jail because of a bike?’
‘Who says I would go to jail? I have friends everywhere…and I mean everywhere!’
‘I forgot…soo meet me for lunch?’
‘Sure…where and when?’
‘Planet…around 12.30?’
‘See you then…’
‘Bye’
They hung up and Bette made her way to the bathroom. A hot shower and coffee afterwards should wash away the tense feeling she had because of last nights nightmares.
After the shower she got dressed and went to the kitchen, started the coffee machine and got the Newspaper from her doorstep. With a fresh coffee and her newspaper in hand she sat down in one of her comfortable italian leather chairs and took a look over the whole city. The view through the windows of her Penthouse suite was amazing.
After an hour she got herself ready to head out. Before she met Alice she needed to take care of a few things.
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12:30 pm – Planet Cafe
Bette walked in and looked around for Alice. It didn’t take her long. Alice jumped up and waved franticly. She walked over to her and sat down
‘Hey Al’
‘Hey good to see you. Let’s order…I am soooo hungry’
‘No problem…what do you want?’
‘Dunno…what do you eat?’
‘I think I will have a salad.’
‘Oooh….exciting….salad….’ Alice made a face
‘Very funny…I like light food. I want to stay healthy and in shape.’
‘Bette you are one of the hottest women in LA…and the richest anyway.’
‘But money can’t buy health!’
‘To a certain extant…’
The waitress came over.
‘May I take your order?’
‘I want a Burger with everything and extra fries and that healthy bunny over there wants a salad’
‘Alice!’
‘Understandable…I guess she wants to keep her body so hot and sexy.’
The waitress said to Bette with a wink, turned around and walked back to the counter.
‘See Bette…Women throwing themselves at you…and you are still single…I don’t understand that.’
‘Alice…please…you know exactly why.’
‘But Bette…it’s been 3 years. You have to move on.’
‘I am moving on’
‘One-night-stands are not what I call moving on. I mean that you have to let somebody in your heart.’
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Hey!I am so glad you finally decided to take the leap and post this baby. Once again, I have to say that I am amazed that you taught yourself. It shows that you’re extremely intelligent and talented, which seeps through in your story. I love it so far and can’t wait to read what else you’ve got for us. Please, post very soon!
Still there! :-) Great a new start! It’s exiting, there’s mystery. Can’t wait to read the next part. Post soon!! And don’t worry about the mistakes (if they are any…^^) I don’t see them it’s not my language either. lol
Your command of English is impressive. This is an interesting start and I am looking forward to how your story develops. PPS.
Oh yes another interesting story and pls do continue:) Alice is funny but where is da rest of da gang. PPPS
I sure hope you continue this…pps
great start,Alice will always be Alice. she must be easy to write.Okay,what happen three yrs ago. thanks
I’m intrigued…I wonder what was Bette’s dream about??? Where does Tina come in this story??? Very good start :) I’m guessing for the title that you will be telling this story by Tina’s point of view???
Wonderful start to a new story that I will add to my list of stories that I like to keep up with. I can’t wait to see where this story is going.
intriguing start… i will await the next installment!
oooh.. exciting.. so what happened three years ago?
Great start – but you have so many questions to answer. Means you will have lots of chappies to write?