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Thief of my heart – chapter 16
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Chapter 16
Shane and Tina’s apartment
Tina opened the door and was met with darkness and silence. She didn’t bother to turn on the light and was on her way trough the living room to her bedroom when she felt that someone was watching her. She turned to the couch and recognized Shane sitting there and watching her every step. Shane switched the light on.
‘Shane…what are you doing up so late?’
‘Where have you been?’
‘What?’
‘I asked where you have been?’
‘I had to take care of something. Like I told you.’
‘Tina you know that I am not a nosy person but I am worried about you. Honestly you scared me earlier. What is going on?’
Tina let out a loud sigh and sat next to Shane on the couch. She thought about all the possible storys she could tell her but in the end it would be a lie. And is it right to lie to a friend. Or in that case her best friend? But Tina wasn’t sure if Shane would take the truth very well.
‘You know Tina…the thing is that there are a few possible scenarios I can think of. And all of them scare me. Because I love you. You are my best friend, the person that I trust with my life. But right now I am not sure if you trust me the same way. Please…if you are in trouble I will do everything to help you. But you have to tell me what’s going on.’
Tina saw tears in Shane’s eyes. Something she has never seen before. Shane was always cool, laid back and strong. She felt that Shane really cared for her. And now was the time for Tina to show her that she cared for her as well and that she trusted her.
‘Shane…this is not easy for me. I am scared’
‘Scared of what?’
‘Scared that you will hate me or at least think less of me when I tell you. You are my best friend and I love you so much. I couldn’t bear losing you.’
‘Tina you won’t loose me. There is nothing what could make me run from you. You are stuck with me!’
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Bring on the date! PPS:)
jay…so very jealous of the Pink concert..I adore her and unless I go somewhere else in the world I have no idea when I will be able to see her. She is definitely not in the States this year. Great chapter and bring on the date…pps
Thank you for the update! It was really good. Can’t wait for the next chapter. You mean so much to me my friend. Take care of your back. I loved the Pink pictures.
So Pink was awesome? Glad you got to have some enjoyment. Happy that Tina came clean with Shane. Can’t wait for the date to take place.
first :D haha this is so funny! loved the chapter! you’re doing well, keep this up!! thanks
I like your story a lot. I hope you will have time to write a new chapter soon. BTW I don’t think it was wrong to go to a concert. Maybe your back would have appreciate the comfort of a couch, but now you have definitely enough wonderful memories to go through therapy. I wish you all the best.
Like your story… can’t wait to see what happens at the dinner date. Take care of your back. Thank you :)
Wrong to go to a Pink concert, NOT. How could that be, your back was going to be bitching at you anyway and regardless of the price of the ticket you still had a priceless experience, so says Md. Ok the story was great, like how they are both looking forward to the date, so am I. Thank you, Md aka Oma
Loved Bette’s ‘neglecting your best friend’ comeback, made me laugh! Always fun to read this story!!! … I’m a Pink fan too and can understand your excitement to go to her concert, but you’ve got to take care of yourself! (said in my stern nurse voice *grin*).
I’m shocked that Tina told Shane the truth. I love Alice, she is so funny. It’s nice to see Bette excited about her date with Tina. I hope Bette wears a HOT, little SEXY black dress. Delicious, Tina would not resist her. Good post. Continue, I am enjoying the story.
Hey Jay – Hope you hang in with your back — they are stubbornly slow to heal (and dancing/jumping don’t tend to help :>) – but heck who could resist for Pink!!!) I am anxiously awaiting “the date” between our lovely thief and art collector — there should be a lot of fireworks. So Shane had no idea what Tina was doing – that would be shocking. I still think that Bette will ultimately be the thief of Tina’s heart! More soon please…
OMG i was fooled by the 5th page..”shaking a finger” that just not right.. excellent update even with the missing 5th page.. LOL
Fun – bring on the date!
well worth the wait ;) thanks for thee shout out! my feelings are mutual as you know
Hi Jay! Wow! It was great to learn you had the chance to go to a Pink concert. That woman is a wonderful performer. We completely understood your enthusiasm. However, you also have to take care of your back, sweetie. Go easy on that. Health cannot be replaced with anything, dearest friend. Please keep it cool. We want to have you around for the longest time! As for the story, all the scenes you brought to life were fantastic. Tina’s confession to Shane about her “secret life” was really needed, as she shares a room with her. Bette’s reaction to Al’s comments was an absolute hoot. We laughed so hard when Bette cut the phone convo with her. Can’t wait for your next chappy. Get well soon, dearest friend. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks. – Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)