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Timid Devotion (Part 11)
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They had spent the better part of two hours outside just laughing and talking before slowly making their way back to Bette’s house.
"So … what are we gonna do now?" Tina asked, trying to hide the hope behind her voice. She had wanted to touch Bette for so long, all those weeks of pretending to be straight and uninterested had really started to wear her down. She bit her lip at the image in her mind of Bette’s shirt off.
"Mmm … I’m not really sure. Maybe we could go out for dinner?" Bette asked with an innocent smile, taking her hand from Tina’s to put her arm over the blonde’s shoulder.
Tina blushed at all of the attention. She realized that they should probably wait.
‘Why is she so hot?!’ Tina asked herself in silence, looking over to the gorgeous brunette at her side. ‘This would be so much easier if she wasn’t so fucking hot. She’s on fire! Ahh I’m on fire. I’m getting hot. Is it hot out here?’
"It’s pretty hot," Tina smiled, fanning herself with her hands.
Bette looked around and shrugged with a smile, "Yeah, I guess. Want some water when we get inside?"
‘Mmm a whole bathtub of water with only naughty intentions,’ Tina smiled to herself mischievously before snapping out of it. She couldn’t help but chuckle to herself. ‘Oh my god, I’m so terrible! Since when have I been a slut? Hahaha I need to contain myself.’
"Sure," she finally answered, walking up the yard to the door.
As Bette got her keys out, Tina’s eyes subconsciously went to her ass and just lingered there until she heard the door open. Once she pulled her eyes up, she saw Bette looking back at her, still standing in her place, with a teasing smile on her face.
"Oh god," Tina smiled, her eyes wide as she looked out to the street and pursed her lips.
Bette chuckled, "Well, I’d rather you be interested than not, so I can’t complain."
Tina blushed a deep shade of red and shook her head, walking into the house behind Bette. "Sorry," she said quietly, surprised by how shy she was, and yet so eager at the same time.
Just as the door closed, the phone rang.
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they’re so incredibly cute. i can’t wait for what you have in store for them.
They are so cute together! That would have been so embarrassing if Bette found out what she was doing! lol They are great together! Great job! PPS
Thank you for posting… they are so cute and love the teasing… please post soon! Great Chapter. :)
That chapter definitely had me smiling! Tina needs to get herself under control or she just might explode. :) Love this story! Thanks for posting!
u r a big tease…
When these two do get together it’s gonna be explosive! Love all the teasing though, and oh my how embarassing for Tina! PPS:)
hahaha oh Tina! oh my goodness these two are so cute i could explode! love this story! I love their inner thoughts! PPS ; )
So cute! I don’t know which is cute-r…Bette and Tina or Ellen and Portia…=DI’m so lovin’ it
I’m so wishing that Bette had asked a few more questions of Tina… she would have cracked in a minute! Can’t wait for more. Both of your stories are wonderful!
Tina is so caught up in Bette. There is no way that she can run away from her or stop thinking about her. Bette is ingrained into Tina’s brain.
that was soooooo cute and bette is so in love haha. alice killed me “u love her u wanna marry her” hahaha soo funny and in sure alice will be in shock when she will see bette drooling from love
They are so cute and sweet, Tina is so funny. Please post more, thanks!
That was cute and made me giggle !! WE’re getting there…….. :)
that phone call was hilarious :) i’m off to read the other update… which is probably a real NC-17 ;)
Endlessly cute) Thank you very much for your story, I am waiting for updates.
I cant tell you how much I’m LOVING this story…they are so amazing togetehr…and you are a fricken TEASE!!But seriously bi..thanks..its great…now come on..bring me one of your infamous love scenes…mwah
OK, my heart is beating waaaaayyyyyyyy too fast. I CANNOT wait for your next update. All of this teasing and want is driving me CRAZY. Have mercy on me. LOL PPS
They are so sweet and you are a tease! I am ready for a nice, long love scene. Bring it on. pps
Great Chapter – i love being able to read Tina’s dirty thoughts in the moment like ‘bathtub of water with only naughty intentions’ – that was great! She seems innocent but her dirty thoughts would prove other wise. I can appreciate Bette’s patience but come on she is not a saint – at least let them have another make out session – (but don’t mind me my heart rate is still accelerated from your other story). These two have a very cute flirty way about them but they are just about on the edge. So glad Tina took matters into her own hands (she is stopping torture by touching)! Looking forward to your next chapter! PPS
I think Bette knew what Tina was doing. Poor Tina. Those two are so cute together.
teasing us like that I saw too NC-17 and thought awh i knew it but then it wasn’t so….LOL PPS
So cute… This sexual teenager tension you create is great… thanks
I love it! how do you do that?? the tension?? i really would like to know :P i’m writing my own story now (on the other site) but it’s fucking difficult to put some tension in it :P good job!! thanks
adorable!!!:)PPS