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Timid Devotion (Part 21)
Bette watched in wonderment as Tina crawled backwards with her face at Bette’s waist. She eagerly started unbuttoning her pants with a hunger in her eyes that Bette enjoyed. She hoped it was the first of many fun-filled nights with her new lover.
Tina worked quickly, gently pulling the brunette’s pants and thong down over her hips and stopping at the sight. Her eyes widened with desire. "Bette …" She wanted to touch her, but decided to take her pants off first. She pulled them off and threw them behind her, oblivious as to where they landed. She was so entranced by the sight of her girlfriend laying before her, naked.
Bette enjoyed Tina’s eyes on her. It was making her throb with need. She spread her legs and allowed Tina to take the sight in, and smiled when she saw Tina’s eyes widen even further and practically started drooling.
"Oh my god … you’re the most beautiful sight …" Tina whispered, mesmorized as she smoothed her hands up Bette’s thighs and stopped just short of getting her fingers wet.
Bette was trembling with anticipation, looking up to see Tina biting her lower lip with a smile. She shivered at how excited Tina was, just looking at her body. Such amazement in her eyes.
"I want to touch you," Tina blurted, completely entranced. She swallowed hard and moved her right hand over.
Bette shook gently as she felt Tina’s cool finger right on her clit, locking her eyes with Tina’s. She held the sheets tightly and watched Tina continue. She thought her eyes would roll back. There was something so sexy about everything Tina did and the way she touched her. She did her best to keep from flailing around.
"Ahh you’re so whet," Tina said in a low voice, watching as she slipped her finger lower and inside of the brunette about an inch. She felt Bette’s legs tremble and looked up to the brunette. "Did I hurt you baby?"
"No," Bette whimpered, bringing her head up again, "Ahhh-fuck … no no."
Tina smiled, "Good. Because I haven’t even started."
Bette tried to keep her sanity at those words. "F-f-fuck." She gasped, writhing around some more.
"Keep still," Tina grinned, getting off on how crazy she was driving her lover. Bette saw her smile and smirked to herself at the tease. She tried to still herself again.
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Well, this post definitely unleashed the animal within me! Soft and slow, yet hot and powerfull.
I love how excited Tina is, and I’m sure Bette likes it too! :) Love the update. Thanks for posting!
Is it normal to feel like them so giddy, that was brilliant my friend, wow B you are amazing, it really feel great reading it so how does it feel when you are living it. Thank you so much for this amazing pleasure, you are one of my best writers ever.
“Did I hurt you baby?” “No,” Bette whimpered. Tina smiled, “Good. Because I haven’t even started.”**THUD**** Bette wasn’t the only one who was saying “Fuck Me.” LOL! WOW Bi,I love slow and sexy and you are the best at writing it. I’m sure Bette will be happy to fill Tina’s order for more sex tomorrow and vice versa. Can’t wait for your next post.
go tina!!!!
Good gracious alive, either Bette is going to die from lack of fluid (Tina stole it all) or Tina is going to die from exhaustion. That was an awesome post. The night of first love (well first time in bed together) will go down in history, the start of Tibette.
Damn that was so freaking hot and loving it. Please post more, thanks!
the tease is over… well done…
SPEECHLESS. Off to take a cold shower. WOW. PPS
My god!!! Will somebody call the fire brigade please???? Ha I loved it!!! PPVVVVVVVS!!!
Wow!!! PPS
no more teasing I see and Bette has to be thinking now so well worth all the teasing and wait…You manage to capture Tina excitement and giddiness through out the NC17 and that was perfect. Staying true to the character you have create for Tina. Awwh.. Excellent
One sex filled weekend coming up! lol PPS:)
Yeah well Tina…I think we’re all feeling abit giddy right now…among other things! So worth waiting for!!
Tina…She made Bette a pillow queen? Nice =D i’m never reading your updates in the library again… I feel so exposed! lmao and ppl kept coming up to me that day!
Holy! *THUD* sorry let me just pick myself off the ground that was so fucking hot I can’t even speak… I’ll have to read it again ;) PPS and yeah I’ll never learn to not read your stories in public places LOL I just get too excited when I see an update well done as always
haha “poor bette” tina wants to to know her new place by heart anf tonge haha damn shes so lucky
wow… that was very, very well done! loved tina’s reaction – perfect! and now that the wait is over… bring on the weekend ;)
WOW!!! Damn that was so HOT and SEXY!!! Love IT!!! Now bring on the weekend. Thank you so much Bi
It’s great to have your two fictions when I’m jonesing for the L Word. Love it as usual. Thank you!
Tina is so cute! I love how excited she it with learning all she can. ; )
Amazing tender no teasing :) Love it! Thank you and cold shower here I come :)
ha ah ha…Tina kilsl me-‘Is it normal for my tongue to be sore’ What an amazing chapter, thanks lady for yet another diplay of masterful writing;)
now that the teasing is over, its more cold shower for us! great job!