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I Remember Rivers – Tina Kennard and Bette Porter
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“Well, are you the final vote? Who decides,” Dana asks, “if we have another, Alice?”
“I have a vote. I just haven’t voted yet. Who knows she may change the alphabet all around on us and start with E’s or C’s tomorrow.”
“What about your mother’s name? Have you considered naming the baby after her?” Dana asks.
“I couldn’t do that. No, I just couldn’t do that.” I shake my head slowly.
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I stop by The Planet on my way to Sunset and then down to the hotel banquet room. My father is meeting Kit and Benjamin here tonight for dinner and I feel the need to drop by and see Kit before he comes and my evening gets swept into another paradigm entirely.
<!–nextpage–>“There you are Lil Sis. Don’t worry, Daddy is going to be fine here unless he doesn’t like the food but I’ve made sure that doesn’t happen.” Kit says as she greets me inside the door.
“No, I’m not checking on you.” I laugh as we sit at the bar. She waves away the bartender for her.
“Do you want something?” the bartender asks me.
“Pellegrino is fine.” I turn my attention on Kit, “Do you think that Daddy just had affair after affair while he was with our mothers?”
“Something other than the obvious bringing this on?” She looks at me sideways, “Any new developments I should know about? Any missiles gotten loose that might fall from the sky?”
“I was thinking about my mother today. Names for the baby and she came up. I just wondered how many, many women’s hearts he broke before slowing down?”
“That is the thing about those old timey men. They may beat you with a peach tree switch if they catch you sneaking off from church, but they’re burning through The Commandments as fast as they can.” Kit vents.
“I know, I have to really work to forgive Daddy for his hypocrisies and for the way he behaves about Tina. Don’t get me started on the baby.”
“But to answer your question: How much of a dog was our father? I have no idea. But considering how we turned out, my guess would be a bad dog, Bette, a very bad dog. But look, don’t you get all twisted up about it. Things are better with you right now.” I watch Kit’s attention drift from talking to me over to a group by the door.
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As inept and clumsy as it sounds, “Just wow!”
Keep them coming.
Another great story,thank you.
Great description. I really like what you’re doing with the series. Thanks!
I loved the scene in the shower: so sweet!
Nicely done, as always. This is one of my favorites, by far!
They must serve some mighty fine coffee in New Orleans! It wasn’t weird at all, I liked the way you had them re-connect. You are an amazing writer.
Hey Blackbird
I am really enjoying the style in which you are taking us through familiar storylines with your own unique twists. You’ve captured their essence so it flows beautifully. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Beautifully written. There were so many lines I wanted to highlight – shame i wasn’t reading this on kindle. Thanks for sharing Blackbird.
Another great story looking forward to reading them all
Ok the breast milk sucking has really intrigue me like omg, and I too love the shower scene, bossy Tina but hilarious st the same time love it. I would have been so scared as I do not like storms!
Getting so much from re-reading! Highly recommended.
Beautiful storyline, superbly written!
You’re a class act Blackbird!
While working with Jacky on the book covers I did a nice, nice re-write of one of my favorite stories, I Remember Rivers. I hope you will enjoy the re-write. I find the polish to this immersive story of their love affair quite interesting and deeply romantic as well as amusing in all the right places.
Enjoy!
Blackbird
On another re-read of this fantastic series of stories and find a re-write :)
The stories are always great but are now made better by the super pictures.
Thank you Blackbird.
To be able to visualise the storm raging and the lightning flash across the skylight at the same time as watching Bette wondering if it would be perverse to want to taste the fluid in Tina’s engorged breasts. This for me is pure unadulterated erotica being played out between two heavenly females.
I read quite a lot but this level of intimacy in full blown high definition is deeply moving. The freedom to let go and let guttural instinct and pure arousal run free is just immense.
The trust between Tina and Bette to fall that deeply is truly sensational.
Another Incredible chapter.