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To Live Without You (Chapter 13)
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The car trip was silent, aside from the occasional question from Shane. Alice sat in silence, Dana back seat, stewing in sexual frustration and just regular old frustration, the athlete tried to shake the images from their car encounter out of her head but it was impossible. Alice writhing in pleasure inches from her hands, Dana shook her head again trying to forcably remove them from her mind. Shane had finally had enough,
"Ok are you guys going to fucking tell me, or are we going to sit in the horribly awkward and uncomfortable car?" Dana shrugged, looking for a way to change the subject.
"I’ve got nothing to say…except Alice fucked Gabby in your room on your bed and didn’t tell you." Alice’s eyes grew wide as she gasped looking at Dana then to Shane, whose face went dead.
"I really hope that’s a joke…Alice…it’s a joke right?" Alice tilted her head toward the window,
"It was like years ago Shane, I’m sure you’ve washed your blankets since then." Shane winced and Dana grinned in the back, Alice shooting a glare her way. After a few minutes of silence the writer began tapping on the window in time with the low rock music,
"I forgot to ask whose car this was," Shane slapped her hands on the steering wheel of the white Grand Prix glancing over to Alice.
"The owner of The Lookout, we’re friends, my car was at Carmen’s so I borrowed hers." The writer nodded, she didn’t really care about the damn car, it was just so fucking quiet, Alice was looking for anything to talk about. Shane was obviously feeling the tension too, and making small talk was never her thing, but when they’d sat in the car another fifteen minutes without speaking Shane decided to take the conversation into her own hands.
"So how was the ping-pong match?" Dana nodded in the backseat, running her hands over her face trying to stay awake.
"It was good, Alice’s niece is really good at ping-pong and tennis, she actually invited me to her championship tournament next month." Alice chuckled,
"Yeah Dana is wildly popular with the high school girls, I think I heard rumors about your
nomination for prom king." Dana rolled her eyes as Shane laughed along with the writer.
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I was going to start calling you the daydreamer queen but Dana dreams of Alices in her sleep too, lol. You continue to make me crazy but I must admit, I like it! Not only do you make it hot… you make me laugh as well. The tension that you are building between the two is undeniable. Will the pill-popping athlete do something crazy… and I don’t mean dreaming. I see waivering on Alice’s part… with that reference to “that woman… Victoria” and things being “ok” with Cliff. She really can’t be all that happy. I like to see where you go with the Victoria/Gena connection… there has to be one? Looking forward to the Superbowl party, something tells me that you have something special planned for that. I love it as usual. I’m your captive fan… I won’t stray. Update soon (I’ll be on you too, no mental blocks allowed)lol
Read then all 1 thru what 12. every one cango back and read at anytime. I do that a lot. Love that Dana was dreaming of Alice and that Alice heard it. thanks
wow. great update. love that dream! how embarrassing. i really hope my friends would wake me if i was having that kind of dream! lol…
Yet another great update! I got all excited by just reading the summary and the first scene had me laughing out loud! OMG, I felt so embarassed for Dana!!!! (I had the same feeling watching that awkard sex scene between Dana and Jenny.) Good that Shane realizes that she made a HUGE mistake by erasing the message. :P Dana and Alice will have to talk (I hope it doesn’t gets you to depressed wirting that part ;) ) and maybe there is a little Shane intervention needed to get them back together? Looking forward to see Emily in the future, I agree with you, she has great interactions with both of them. :D
Another great update, loved the car ride home. There is such a strong connection there, I just they realize how special that is. Shane will do the right thing I hope! Post soon, thanks!
Great update! I loved Dana’s comment about Alice and Gabby. It was so random, and so Dana! lol The dream was painfully funny. I knew she was going to call out Alice’s name. Priceless. Alice needed time to heal after the breakup with Dana. She didn’t get over Dana, but she became functional. I’m still torn over Shane’s decision.
wow really loving this story :) erm please post soon and get alice and dana back together pleeeeeease, for me *puppy eyes* lolbye x
As always, you didnt’ disapoint. You have become one of my main Danish writer’s right now. I loved the car scene, and I’m glad she called out Alice’s name; it was hilarious. I think that Shane made the right decision, if Dana and Alice would’ve gotten together then it wouldn’t have been healthy for Alice; she needed time to find herself again. Aye, it wasn’t Shane’s decision to make for that, but it was the right one at that time, IMHO…Well, can’t wait for your next chap…(hope it’s longer) Cheers mate!!!
god this just gets better and better all the time and I can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon as for dana dream that was to cool love it