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Alice was never the girl. You know, the pretty one, the
popular one, the girl people fought over like she was the fattest
diamond on display at Tiffany’s. So when her relationship with Dana
combusted mostly due to her insecurities, though the athlete honestly
needing to explore her romantic options was also a factor, and Alice
slowly found herself dating and falling for Helena Peabody the last
thing Alice thought could happen was that Dana would want her back.
But it was.
And suddenly Alice was the girl. Because now two people wanted her and
not just any two people. She was wanted by a famous and wildly popular
professional athlete and the charming heiress of a fortune theorized to
be close to the billions.
To
be perfectly honest, in the beginning Alice enjoyed the fact that Dana
and Helena wanted her. After all, this was the first time in her life
that she had ever received such attention and it made her feel so very
good about herself. Though she hated what she saw it doing to Dana and
Helena in the process.
The situation had even started off painfully. Dana appearing on her
doorstep at an ironically late hour begging that Alice take her back.
Leaving Alice first stunned and then concerned for the slumbering
Helena only a few feet away in her bedroom. She didn’t quite know how
to reply and didn’t get much chance to ponder it because Dana was
kissing her.
Kissing her like when their romance started. Kissing her long, hard,
and deep with such passionate conviction that Alice though her insides
might melt from the heat it inspired. When it ended and the tennis
player pulled away, Alice was sure she was a reflection of Dana during
the four a.m. kiss. Her eyes wide and lost in hurt confusion.
Much like that first kiss, Alice ran away, though not in the form of
leaving her own apartment but in the motion of stepping back and calmly
shutting her front door in Dana’s face. She shut the door and ignored
the soft knock on it and walked about, pulling the cords from her two
land line telephones and turning off her cell to make sure Dana
couldn’t persist in gaining her attention. Attempting to block out what
had just happened as she climbed back into bed with Helena who
instinctively wrapped her up in a sleepy embrace upon her return.
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!