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View from a Tangent…chapter 15
Tina stopped at the thresholdshe did not go after Betteeven though every single cell in her body screamed to..
What was going on with Bette…Tina knew it was because she left her…duhbut what was she going on about?…..she mentioned Nathan but how on earth could she know about her datewell not really date but re-connecting with an old friendhow?
Unless someone saw her and told Bette.but who on earth would do that?….Tina started to clean up the mess Bette made and sat downshe put her head in her hands and cried.god Bette why did you break us? Why did you go looking for someone else wasnt I enough? What about our baby?…why did she go and ***** Candace after THAT??…Tina felt her old anger rise up and any pity Tina felt for Bette vanished.she was seeing Nathan again on Fridayjust a dinnerthats all.Tina tried not to think of Bette but it was hardTina still cared for herloved herbut they were finished.Tina pushed every feeling deep inside hershe could not deal with it all..she wrung her hands and started at the space where Bette was only a few minutes before
Meanwhile Bette was wandering aimlessly in the townhouse underground parkingwhere did she park her SaabBette forgot that she parked in on the curb outside.the parking lot was dark cool and was getting darker and evening went on.Bette was thoroughly exhaustednow that she gave up on Tina ever coming home Bette felt every loving feeling come back in fullshe loved Tbut how to express in a way T would appreciate?…how to explain why she need herwhy she felt incomplete withouthow stupid she was when Bette started to take T for granted..all these thoughts gave her a huge headache and Bette held her hands tightly
.where the ***** was her car?….
Bette thought she heard a sound and half-turned when suddenly two huge hairy hands grabbed her from behindone pressed over her mouth and the other reached around and punched her in the stomachBette felt all the breath and strength leave her and she crumpled to the groundthe mans weight went with her and she was crushed face-down on the cementnow fear began to grip heradrenaline rushed through her and Bette started to squeal against the hand and bit down hardthe hand grabbed her hair and smashed her face on the cementthe other hand twisted her arms upwards till she was left helpless her neck exposedBette was knocked out.she came to seconds later and realized what was happeningThe man ripped her pants down and was fumbling with her underwearhis free hand hold her arms downBette screamed and struggledbut all her strength was spent and the mans weight crushed her breath from herthe man grabbed her neck and squeezed until Bette almost blacked out.then he began to speak to herin a blood-curdling whisper.
.*****.if you ***** scream again Ill bite your cheek off and ***** it out so shut the ***** up shut the ***** upshut up.struggle again and Ill skull ***** you.ill cut you up in little piecesso shut up you bitchyou ***** womanfuck youur gonna like this huhyoull never get a bigger ***** than mine you ***** *****.call me daddy little girllittle *****..call me daddy.make any more move and ill cut your eyes out with this knife
With that the man presented the knife and tapped her eyelid with itBette went limpstill
.move again and ill cut off your eyelids.
Bette was breathing very fastshe felt panic like she never did before..her heart beat like a jack rabbitthe man then pulled her underwear all the way down and Bette felt the breeze on her backsidethe man started to lick her neck and bit her ear so hard Bette silently screamed against the cement.suddenly she felt the most burning painit was like someone lit a match down therethe man thrust hard harder and harderall the while biting her neck until it bledBette sobbed and cried and struggled.finally the man stood up and kicked Bette in the stomach againBette went limpthe footsteps disappeared and Bette was aloneshe crawled maybe 10 feet then stopped.she could see the sky from herethere was a little space.Bette cried very quietlycalling out Tinas name until her mouth moved with no voice coming out.
Bette felt blood in her mouthlater realizing she was biting her tongue.
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(42 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
K
Wow that was intense and scary. Good writing but I hate to imagine anyone going through that esp. Bette.
holy sh#t!!! Yea that is a rough one. Just about enough to change her mind about suicide.
omg..that was incredible, it’s so detail , but keep it coming!
Wow another great chapter! Very intense you’ve got me on edge please continue soon!