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    War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 8- ONSLAUGHT

    Next day Louise went to the lab to speak with Tina and Willow.

    Louise: “we have problems with the demons, we need to get those Seraph blades, Wil, Tina; did you get more information about those?”

    Tina: “we have sent probes to the distant planet with a petition”

    Louise: “petition… to whom?”

    Tina: “the humanoids, the pigheaded ones, they sent us a message about the metals in the bright planet; we explained them our problem…; sorry, but I thought if they knew about that, they would get the material for us”

    Louise: “I hope we are not making more enemies”

    Willow: “I think they could help”

    Tina: “besides…, they may be dead by now…, I mean, the probes have traveled time back to reach them, but they may not exist right now”

    Louise: “or they may have migrated to another dimension…, well let’s wait for their answer”

    Tina had sent the message with the probe to the pigheaded people immediately after the last battle and today, when she talks with Louise, they received a strange visit through a portal in the wormhole; a humanoid entity has arrived at the lab and immediately uses telepathy to communicate with them.

    Entity: ‘I am Vira, from the planet Paititia, the First Evil is a common enemy; he belongs to an ancient and powerful race, he is ambitious and he deceived and killed all his congeners, to take their power and get stronger, his race, lived in the planet called Xibalbia, the one located beyond the bright land called Nibiria, where the precious metals abound; the First Evil couldn’t destroy us, and he left toward Heldom; we try to heal his race, but they are still there in a different dimensional plane, they are submissive to the First because is the only one of them who remains alive; however we were able to use genetic material, from the dead, to recreate their race, and they resulted in reptilian beings, the initial corporeal form of the creatures as the First Evil; we discovered how him dominated Uber-vamps, zombies, and demons; we have what you need to destroy those, you need Seraph blades which can be made only from adamas, we will provide you with the material to build the weapons, but you should promise that you won’t stop until the First is defeated and dead’

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    1. Wow, fantastic update!

      I am worried about Bette but i have faith in you that you keep her safe and that they will stay strong and happy in love at the end.

      And please don’t let Tina cheat on her hot warrior. Maybe Glory is the spy you mentioned and i don’t have to worry about that.

      Thank you so much for for the update!

      • Hi Bibi:

        Thanks for your nice comment Bibi; there is a spy in favor of Louise, who is in the Hellmouth, but it’s not Glory, on the contrary, she is as evil as the First; that spy in the Hellmouth is someone mentioned in chapter 1 in in the former story ‘my first time’.

        The First Evil, still, believes Robin Wood is on his side, but it is not, so Robin is no longer his spy in the Scoobie’s group.

        I’ll always try my best to save Bette and Tina, but it has a price in this story, and someone has to pay it; you’ll see who.

        I don’t know if Tina could have eyes for someone else than Bette, especially with this hot warrior garment.

        It’s only two chapters left, I’ll do my best to post them soon.
        Thanks so much again for reading and commenting.

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