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Who am I? But more importantly who the fuck are you? (2)
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Well what i have to say is:
this story sucks ~ Lol I’m so glad you don’t like it. Ive found someone I can agree with.
Incendiary ~ Burnsey is one of my true inspirations. Glad you like the Dana in my mind.
wildtouch ~ And dont ya love the Artistic license the “fiction” part of “fan fiction” gives you? by the way loving your “why did she do this?” story
hate this ~ Ok i do agree I need to pick it up a few notches to reach sick and twisted (I just intended to warn people that they might find the story offensive) However i did try to engave my brain with me writin i means wa u expet frum me wif I.Q. off 37?
Atenea ~ What are you telling people to calm down for?! lol hey im sorry to say the gun was loaded. I did write a back door that has Alice live but I dont like it so I aint posting it. Im sorry if I caused you pain :(
str8trippin’ ~ Thank you I dig Dana too :)
bvhall ~ lol throw you rocks. they might knock some sense to me.
An honest comment ~ Melissa i hate you too dearest. lol :P
RockGrrl ~ lol I think its funny too. ***** I think everything is funny. thanks.
wildtouch ~ two comments wow. Have fun.
TheRealJLO ~ And I like writing different stuff. Thanks, and hey dont worry the negative comments dont bother me in the slightest. Luv reading your stuff too.
Katey471 ~ wow another one of the big names. Lol thanks. I wasnt overly trying to stay true to the storyline I just have trouble being original :P
Phoenix ~ Im sorry if I made you sad but it looks like Ill keep writing. have fun.
Firecracker ~ come on I dont suck that much at golf :( lol Danas not the only truly crazy one (meaning myself)
sulkygeek ~ lol damn someone saw through my plot… this will not do. To be honest i dont believe the story line myself. I didnt find my writing strong enough to support it. thanks for the honesty. this story will be done in maybe 3-5 more posts and then i’ll get to the other one. thanks.
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I’m loving this story, it’s different and new and totally fun! Keep it coming! Oh, but Alice totally has to make it! Think of what a useful plot device she can be… please?!?!
This is something different and I like it…keep on truckin’!!!
Thank you for the comment on my post….I am glad that you like it…anyways…I really like this story that you are laying out for us….and if noone likes it….fuck em…..I like it….
ok two things, one too fricking funny, was told to go read this and so very glad i did. now i have a theory and i’m just going to see if i am right which i often am (snigger snigger). this is a good FF totally out there which is what FF can be so kudos for taking it out there miss ladybeige. as for 2 so your a surfing girl hmmmm (thinking about theory even more) awesome hope you had fun on the coastline. can’t wait for more, cheers.
The gun was loaded? well, like we said in this land “lástima Margarito”, it’s your story and I’m reading but, certainly, you cause me pain ’cause Alice is the reason I watch the show :(. BTW I’m unbelieving about the agent Tina thing, so I’m waiting for the next…
This is funny… it’s like something from the Simpsons… please continue.. liking it
Oh shit i forgot to put the words “real estate” in front of the word “agent” in the last line. lol ~ rolls off to bed, cackling away ~
Dun Dun Daaaa! oh the Suspense! *again with the Mr Burns Hands*
Love ur replies to the comments by the way, hilerious how u dont take life too seriously, well done!
I really like a darker story….. Hmmm… Are you an aussie…. we are the only people I know that call sweats trackys… heheheh Is Dana going to kill everyone, one by one as they get closre to her secret? Great story…. I’ll be reading.