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Who Knew? Chapter 4
When Shane walked into the apartment, she called out for Alice and Dana, but didn’t get a response. It was then that she noticed the pile of clothes in the living room, and the noise coming from Alice’s bedroom. Shane’s eyes got wider as she put the clues together, but before she turned around to escape, she heard a large crashing sound from Alice’s room.
"Just get out of here before you’re scarred for life!" Shane thought.
When Shane opened the door to leave, it creaked loudly, and she felt like kicking it for choosing this moment to make noise.
"Shane?" Alice called out from her room.
"Yeah?"
"Hey, could you give us a hand?"
"God help me from asking this." Shane thought before she continued.
"With what?" Shane’s voice crackled and was laced with fear.
Alice stepped out into the hallway wearing a t-shirt and shorts.
"We unpacking the rest of the boxes in my room." Alice noticed that Shane looked like she was going to be sick.
Shane’s mind just registered what Alice said, and felt majorly relived.
"Oh, so you guys changed into casual clothes to unpack your stuff." Shane said more to herself than to Alice, until one more question popped into her head.
"Wait, then why are there clothes in the living room?"
"Those are Dana’s, she changed in there and I used my room. Why, what did you think we were doing?"
When Shane gave Alice a blank stare, her brain clicked and she started laughing.
"Al, it’s not funny! I might’ve had to go to therepay, as much as I hate it, just to live through something like that."
"That’s a bit dramatic, Yoda, but would you please help us?"
"Uh, well I would, but I don’t know how much of a help I can be, because of this stupid thing."
Shane lifted up her hand to show Alice the swollen bruise.
"Are you sure that’s not broken?"
"I doubt it, besides the swelling stopped."
"Okay, then I guess we’ll just stop for now, and think of something else to do."
"First, I’m going to change because this fucking suit is killing me."
After Shane had changed clothes and bandaged up her hand, she went back out into the kitchen where Dana and Alice were sitting at the small table, talking.
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Whaaaaaaaaa…noooooo! You can’t do that! Ok. I guess you can. I do it too! LOL But still that hurts! haha. Great update. Keep it up!
DAMNN stoppin when it’s getting good!! A good conversation, it’s pretty obvious that dana isn’t over alice either. Shane is so funny, and cute! lol I like this side of her. GREAT update, please post soon! I love it!
This is really good i can’t wait for the next chapter
AH! How DARE you leave us like that!? That’s all I’m going to say, because I’m mad at you for the cliffy! (But great chapter!)
Shane is so fucking cute being nervous! I can’t wait for the date, hope for a new chapter soon!
This update had me laughing out loud for most part of it. :) But hey, you can’t leave us hanging there! I need Dana to answer the question like…right NOW. :D Dana and Alice were really open and honest to each other. I hope Dana won’t chicken out and will give Alice an honest answer. And maybe, maybe there’ll be another activity in Alice’s bedroom besides unpaking Alice’s boxes (I could make a rather perverted comment now, but I’ll keep my mouth shot :P). I really like the fact ‘your’ Shane isn’t as cool and collected as we all think. :)
Hey there, just caught up with your fic. Well Danish will always find a way back to each other! Thats love for ya!lol. This chapter was great with some much needed talkin to each other. They are so obviously still in love with each other. Loved Shanes little playful comments! Post soon and no more teasin with these cliffhangers!lol.Thanks.
Hey, don’t worry, Babe . . . I don’t kick the asses of those that I like or those who are my friends . . . You just so happen to be in one, if not both, of those categories ;-p . . . but you’re such a tease . . . you just can’t leave us hangin’ like that . . . someone can seriously get injured!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, wonderful job and keep it up AND post soon!!! Like always, LYLAS ;-p
Way to go! that was a fab chapter (as usual!) really pleased to see Alice and Dana finally talking honestly! let’s hope things get better from here – can’t wait till next update, and as you requested so politely i’ll try to post later on ;) well done!
“Where does that leave them?” i wanna know too lol. and im dying to see how sharmens date will be! u officially got me hooked ! post soon! ..and btw…im gonna sound like a perv here but, wheres the r rated part ;)lol
it’s not very nice to leave us hanging in midair like that. please post soon.great update!
oooooooooh u are cruel…meany head! post mroe SOON!