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Wings of An Angel – Bette & Tina – Chapter 7
“And you Tina Kennard drive me absolutely insane”. Bette raises her upper body to rest peacefully on her elbows. “Am I forgiven?”, Bette questions as she displays the most adorable puppy sadden bedroom eyes. Tina lovingly caresses Bette’s smooth face and places an escaped strand of hair behind Bette’s left ear. “That depends”. Bette patiently waits for Tina to continue. “What are we doing this afternoon?” Tina is taken by surprise when Bette rolls over to be sheltered between the carpet and Tina’s body. As she straddles Bette’s waist, Tina realizes that she actually likes this position and it shows on her face. Bette comments, “I thought we could go back to my house, lounge by the pool and have a picnic. The weather is perfect for it; warm and sunny. Not a single cloud in the sky”. Bette warmly watches the look of expectation on Tina’s face. “Lounge by the pool. That means a swimsuit”. With a hungry look in her eyes, Tina specifically comments further, “That means us in a bikini”. Bette interrupts Tina’s pondering by asking, “So what do you think?” Bette didn’t believe anyone could move as fast as Tina did to run to her bedroom. Bette raises herself to rest her back against the couch and smiles to herself. A few minutes later, Bette walks towards the bedroom and catches Tina chucking her clothes on the bed. “T, make sure you pack a change of clothes for the party tonight and whatever else you need for a sleep over”. Tina slows her frantic movements and turns her attention to Bette. “A sleep over? Do I need clothes for a sleep over?” Bette licks her lips and replies with, “Not until I bring you home that is”. Tina hurries even further.
Bette’s House
The leisurely drive to Bette’s house was showered with conversation, clasping hands, brushes of meaningful touches, and seductive stares due to the anticipation of tonight’s events. Tina couldn’t stay angry at Bette after she explained her reasoning to wait. She understood Bette wanted their first time of love making to be special; to be memorable for all time to come. Bette eases the car to a stop in the driveway and with much conviction says to Tina, “Welcome home, sweetheart” and leans over for the sweetest kiss she has ever tasted. “You taste like strawberries lathered in whipped cream”. Bette raises her left eyebrow as she thinks, ‘Whipped cream? Not a bad idea’. Tina notices Bette’s devouring look and decides it best not to even ask her what she is thinking about.
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(43 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
Amazing! You have revived my hope that passion like that really does exist! I think I need to go back to bed now, or maybe a cold shower! *wink, wink*
Hot, Hot super hot!!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! my computer is on fire you have buy me new one!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow, I have read this so many times, it was so sweet, esp B telling T “It’s time” and T asking B to “teach her” at the end. Post more soon!!!
dear god in heaven, that was by far one of the best love scenes i have ever read, including books….i literally had my mouth hanging open so long, i have no saliva left….you rock!!!!!
Excellent detail. Very nice. Post again soon for us, please.
WOW that was hot,sexy and beautiful THANKS
Oh my god!!!! I am totally speechless, thankyou for that unexpected pleasure. I don’t even know how to respond to a chapter like that…thankyou..what will you give us from Tina’s turn??
Good God .. that was beautifully sexy. Thank you for your time, the commitment shows and it makes your stories well worth the wait. Thank you. Have a great weekend
Well now, I gotta say that was fucking great, wait no it was….. see look at me not knowing what to say. that doesn’t happen often. Now sneaky hmmm that’s the first time I have been called that. for the record I was just trying to be friendly LMAO. so lessons are expensive?? you don’t give college students any discounts??? LOL
Well I guess if you give us another nc-17 I will forgive you for that mini vacation you just took from writing.
So who’s flirting with who????
can’t wait until next chapter!!!
Just getting in and log on……And look what I find……A long awaited post from Leo Paradise…….Now I can go on and say it took you long enough but you know I like the ANTICIPATION…..so I’m not……Great job…..Now looking forward to Bette teaches Tina how to love her…..Post Soon!
Damn Leo! That was great. Your skills are the bomb! I feel like I read 5 pages of 4play….you go you! Nice…..very nice.
But, I know your not done yet; its now Tina’s turn to pleassure and please Bette which means – say it with me ya’ll….
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Damn so fucking hot and sexy and awesome, love it. Now let see how Bette gonna teach Tina how to show her love. Post soon please, thanks!
OMG..serious the most fucking hot nc-17 ever i dont need just a cold shower i need relieve right now..lol..and that line “i born for you”..priceless..ok cant wait for payback and how great student Tina will be..lol..post soon please
That was so HOT! Can’t wait for Bette to give Tina lessons on how to please her. Next chapter coming soon i hope.
Haha it would literally be Bette’s pleasure! Hehe Yes I must say, Bette definitely pleased Tina in this chapter!! Excellent job, Leo! It was well worth the wait. I love how descriptive your writing style is and how you tie all aspects in, from their emotions to the ambience of the room. Congrats on your first NC-17, very well done! Thank you!!
great, great job, luved it@!!!!!!!!!!