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    You Want Her Bad Don’t You…sequel to NTWD

    Story written on April 9, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=53116
    Author Notes:

    Tina talks, Bette talks and Shane gets a slap upside the head.

    Thats what Im saying.

    Instead of saying anything Carmen captured Bettes smooth lips with her own and kissed her fiercely. After a few minutes of this Bette reluctantly pushed her away.

    You need to go before I drag you into this house and have my way with you.

    That would be bad how, Carmen asked with a raised eyebrow

    I want to take things a little slower okay?

    Carmen smiled at the uncertainty in the voice of the caramel colored beauty in front of her, Slow it is Elizabeth.

    Bette smiled at this, Thank you…Rosa.

    Carmen straightened, Howd you found out my middle name?

    Bette stepped away from Carmen turning toward the door, Oh I have my ways. I have my ways.

    With that she entered the house closing the door on a smiling Carmen. Bette leaned back against the door and smiled. This had been an amazing night. Not bothering to turn off the lights she kicked off her sandals by the door and walked further into the house. Turning on a tableside lamp she almost jumped out of her skin when she saw Tina sitting in a recliner.

    Good God Tina you scared the ***** out of me! What are you doing here, Bette asked rubbing a hand over her heart

    I needed to talk with you, Tina remarked rising to her feet

    Bette glanced at the clock above the television, Its three in the morning Tina.

    Ive been here for a couple of hours.

    Sitting in the dark? Wheres Arianna?

    In her room, Tina remarked with a jerk of her head to the room down the hall

    Ah, Bette remarked with understanding, I want to go check on her and change and then we can talk.

    Tina blinked a moment as she got an up close and personal view of the outfit that Bette was wearing. It showed off her amazing body and clung to her glorious curves.

    Okay, Tina asked after a moment flushing as she realized she had been opening ogling the woman before her

    Bette just smiled and went into Ariannas room at the house. Peaking inside the crib she saw her daughter resting peacefully on her stomach. Smiling she bent down and kissed her on the back of the head and then went into her room. Bette slowing changed out of her clothes getting into a pair of yoga pants and black tank top.

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    1. This is just great im really getting to see the thing between Bette and Carmen and thats down to your writting which is great so keep it coming i cant wait… cause its going to be HOT right? lol

    2. Great story !I cannot say to much more. I have company and they cannot understand me being on this site. I love you and your writing ! Please continue to write me and tell me what you really think of my stories. I appreciate your feedback.

    3. Awwwwwwwww….Bette’s happy. That’s beautiful. I loved this chapter. Great writing!! You gave such dimension to the characters and I like the idea of Bette finally moving on.

    5. You’ve given each of the characters depth. This seems very plausible, Bette moving on, Tina has, and why not with Carmen–she’s beautiful and kind and Shane is ok with it. Your writing is very engaging and I’m looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing this story.

    6. No words I can say to describe your writing, you got me hooked on what will happen next. It just brought a smile on my face that Bette is finally happy and moving on. Everyone is cool about it and Tina has to accept that Bette, has the right to move on too…Please continue.

    7. AAAHHH! Bette’s happy, makes me smile. Can’t wait for the NC17…i’m hoping its Bette and Carmen….very hot indeed. thanks for your great story.

    9. Ah, not much better in [TLW] life than Bette smiling. A lovely chapter, great story ideas, dialogue that flows, and humor always. Keep up the great work! You know for sure that I’ll be reading it, savoring every chapter of every story you share. Thanks!

    11. Your story is very refreshing. I’m a B/T fan, but this brings a new perspective to it. They should both be happy. Can’t wait for the NC-17!!!

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