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Chopped and Screwed – (Chapter: 18: Night of Lover's Passion)
Once everything has been paid for, Ashley invites me to sit outside on the beach. We stroll out of the restaurant hand in hand, barefoot, where there is a blanket laid out on the sand. On the blanket there are also two sets of outfits.
“I thought you might want to change out of those clothes for phase four,” she explains.
Even in the darkness of night, I can tell that it is a pair of capris along with my favorite Famous Stars and Straps shirt. She also has her favorite outfit: A dark pair of capris along with an ed Hardy shirt and under amour.
We change together although I can barely make out any details of features in the darkness, only a silhouette of her figure.
“You decent?” she asks.
“Yeah,” I confirm, taking her hand in mine and leading us to the blanket.
She takes a seat first and guides me to sit in between her legs. When I’m situated, she wraps her arms around me and rests her chin on my shoulder.
“Don’t you think the ocean looks even better at night?”
I scan the horizon and see light from the moon reflecting off of the water, giving the illusion of dancing light.
“I like it better at night,” I agree.
I relax back into her right shoulder, my face now to the sky.
“Look at that. The stars are so beautiful,” I comment.
“Not as beautiful as you,” she declares, placing small kisses all over my exposed neck.
I close my eyes and smile.
“You know, I’m not done with the list of things I love about you.”
“Really? Then, please, do continue.”
“Let’s see,” I pause. “I love the fact that you never wake up before noon if you can help it. I love that you’re cool and you don’t even try. I love the fact that you’re a helpless romantic. I love that you can make me smile even when I’m having a terribly sucky day.”
At this point I stop and give her a small kiss.
I continue, “I love that your favorite genre of music is rap, even though you’re a rockstar. I love that you’re you!” I exclaim, then the word ‘I love you’ tumble out of my mouth.
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if you change anything i will be soooo mad.your doing a perfect in fact amazing job.please please keep it going (:
The story is amazing just the way it is…I enjoyed the twist of Spencer blacking out in the middle that was cool…keep it up it really is fineee!! :)
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ok are you serious? OF COURSE THIS STORY IS GOOD! IT IS EFFIN AWESOME! I’ve loved it from the start, I love your writing style and the story itself is not boring in the least. what would possess you to say such things? lol I’m joking I know writers get antsy sometimes about their writing. but honestly I love this story so please see it through to the end and I will continue to read and comment! pms!
Are you kidding me!! That was awesome as is the rest of the story….in fact I do think it’s improving as you seem to be getting more confident as a writer…not that it wasn’t of a pretty high standard to begin with! Please continue, I’m loving it. This chapter was approached well and was sexy and hot but also romantic…awwwww!
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