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Chopped and Screwed – (Chapter: 18: Night of Lover's Passion)
My eyes flutter open to an Ashley with a concerned look etched on her face.
I give her a lazy smile and sigh. “That was amazing. I want more,” I mutter almost incoherently.
“I don’t know if that’s the best idea. You blacked out for a little bit,” she trails.
“No, please. More. I want you.”
That did it because in less than a second, she’s on top of me again, still craving my body.
I feel her fingers run up the length of my slit, coating them in my juice. The fingers find my hole and gently press against it, slowly penetrating me. Once they are fully in, she stills her movements, letting my body adjust.
“Is this okay?”
“More than okay,” I gasp when she starts to pump into me. Her fingers stroke my walls for what seems like an eternity, although I know it couldn’t have been more than a few minutes, before they start to clamp down on her fingers.
“I’m so close Ashley,” I moan. “Make me cum.”
She doubles her efforts, thrusting faster and harder into me; hitting her palm to my clit with every pump.
My entire body tenses and my toes curl with pleasure from my third orgasm of the night. When the last of the pleasurable ripples subside, I go limp on the bed, softly humming contentedly and floating on cloud nine.
Ashley places a gentle kiss on my lips before rolling over and stroking my bangs.
“That was good?” she asks.
I mumble my reply, “More than good. Just let me rest for a minute.”
A few moments later, I prop myself up to admire Ashley’s anatomy more thoroughly. I lean over and place a kiss on her bare chest and go down to her defined abdomen.
“Spencer what are you doing?” she breathes out.
“I’m going to try to make you feel the same way I felt.”
She looks surprised and tells me that I’m not obligated to.
I look up at her with sincere eyes and tell her, “But I want to.”
She runs her fingers through my hair and smiles encouragingly at me when I hesitate at her core.
I take a tentative lick up the entire length of her slit and her hips jump. This makes me smile and I do it again, excited to take in her essence. Trying to mimic her previous movements, I take her clit into my mouth, causing her to moan. I then travel down to her hot hole, letting my tongue slip in while my hand tugs on her clit, eliciting cries of passion from my goddess. It takes longer for her to cum, but she cums all the same, her body shuddering in orgasmic bliss.
After she calms down, she pulls me up next to her, engaging me in a passionate lip lock.
When we pull apart, she lies down and guides me to lie on her shoulder, stroking my hair and whispering sweet nothings in my ear. As I drift off to sleep, I praise the gods above for making her.
**So I want you guys to be completely honest with me. Do you like this story? Is the writing weird or awkward? Simple? Boring? Interesting wtv? Cuz if it is, i IMPLORE you. please please please tell me. DONT be afraid to hurt my feeling
seriously. I want to make my writing good for you guys, but i don’t know what to work on if you don’t tell me. you can even nitpick. i promise i won’t get mad.**
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if you change anything i will be soooo mad.your doing a perfect in fact amazing job.please please keep it going (:
The story is amazing just the way it is…I enjoyed the twist of Spencer blacking out in the middle that was cool…keep it up it really is fineee!! :)
your doing good i like this story and loved the way things progressed to this chapter pms
ok are you serious? OF COURSE THIS STORY IS GOOD! IT IS EFFIN AWESOME! I’ve loved it from the start, I love your writing style and the story itself is not boring in the least. what would possess you to say such things? lol I’m joking I know writers get antsy sometimes about their writing. but honestly I love this story so please see it through to the end and I will continue to read and comment! pms!
Are you kidding me!! That was awesome as is the rest of the story….in fact I do think it’s improving as you seem to be getting more confident as a writer…not that it wasn’t of a pretty high standard to begin with! Please continue, I’m loving it. This chapter was approached well and was sexy and hot but also romantic…awwwww!
This is a great story, don’t you dare change anything about it. Haha