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Love && Basketball – Part 2
Carmen’s House ( 6:00 PM, The Same Day )
Carmen was in her room picking out what she was going to wear to the Planet later. Then she heard someone walking in through the front door, it was her sister.
" i guess i’ll just get changed, then go talk to her " Carmen thought
Carmen picked out a reavealing black top, showing her flat abs and tan body. Then she picked out a pair of black, extremely short, shorts.
" Perfect. " Carmen smiled a little and walked out to her kitchen where her sister was.
" Heyy Car– woahh. " her sister looked at her outfit and was stunned.
" Haha, going on a date ? " she laughed
" No ! Just going to hang out with some friends at some club ! " Carmen blushed
" Really ? Well that’s a pretty sexy outfit for just hanging out with your friends. " she continued laughing
" What’s the girl’s name ? " Carmen’s sister asked curiously
" DAMNIT ! How the hell does she always know !? "
" Her name is Shane, but it’s not a date, we’re just going to hang out with our friends. " Carmen blurted out.
" O-Kay. " Carmen’s sister was still laughing, then stopped and looked at Carmen
" Anyway hey Carm, I have to tell you that I’m going to Las Vegas to do a case for an old friend of mine, and it’s really urgent i have to be out of here in 3 hours and I won’t be back for 1 week, 2 tops. So I’ll just give you this " She reached into her purse and pulled out 2,000 dollars in an envelop. Carmen took it, her sister then said
" Oh and I would really like it if you could stay at one of your new friend’s houses instead of here all by yourself … it makes me worry about you. " her sister looked at her caringly.
" Sure no problem. "
" Anyway I have to go finish doing my hair for tonight, bye. "
" Bye Carmen. "
[ S,J,P ] The Crib ( 6:00 PM )
Shane was looking at herself in the mirror. She was wearing her regular tight jeans, and a silk long-sleeved black button down shirt.
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Cute :) Perhaps a wee bit short. Thanks for writing !
shane likes poeple staying at her house haha uts like a chelter jaaja im liking the story
Oy vey! I really like the plot set-up but like in High School, these chick are clucking too fast. Shane and Carmen are ready to move in after meeting yesterday. LOL. But it’s all good. Alice is priceless! I think the plot needs more juice. But I can’t feel too bad cuz it’s high school and well…high school is like the pettiest 4 years of your life. LMAO! So um…keep it coming. Oh, when does the rumor mill kick into action? There’s gotta be rumors flying around about Shane, Papi and the everyone else :p Since Shane is such a star…what about the coach to the team? Something interesting could come from that eh? Oo, oo, what about the size of Shane’s house? With all the girls that are there between her and Papi and Jenny, that house must be huge. LOL. Like I said, the plot needs more descriptive juice. But…I really like the story.
i lovedddddddddd it , too short for sure but none the less i loved it. really really great.