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Love && Basketball – Part 2
" Okay you two enough with the touchy, feely shit and let’s get the hell out of here, I got like 5 girls waiting for me at the Planet ! " Papi demanded
" Alright, alright whatever you say Pops ! "
They all went out to the car and went to go pick up Carmen.
Carmen’s House
Carmen’s sister had already left for the airport leaving Carmen alone in her house. Carmen was sitting on the couch watching TV until she heard the doorbell ring, she turned off the TV and all the lights and went to open the door. She opened and was greeted by a smiling Shane.
" Heyy Carmen " Shane finished her greeting and took time to notice what Carmen was wearing.
" Damn, she’s so sexyy "
Carmen noticed that Shane was staring at her outfit and she smiled a little.
" you checking me out ? " Carmen joked
" Maybe I am ? " Shane said seriously
Carmen was just about to say something when Papi honked the car horn and yelled
" Yo, Vanilla skillz can we hurry this up !? It’s a Friday night and Papi wants to go clubbin ! " Papi said persistantly
Shane and Carmen just looked at each and laughed.
The Planet
Alice and Dana were already at the Planet along with a few other friends. Dana and Alice were talking when a group of girls walked up and asked
" OMG, is like Shane like here yet ?! " One of the girls asked Alice
" Um, like, No " Alice said mockingly
" OMG, Shut the fuck up, whore ! " another girl replied in a really preppy voice
" What the fuck did you just call her !? " Dana yelled
" Dana it’s okay " Alice said. Alice then turned around and saw that the whole group of girls were still looking at her, she got mad.
" Okay you know what TURN-the FUCK-AROUND and walk the Fuck away, before i jam a motha’ fuckin’ oar up your asses side-ways !! "
The girls didn’t need to be told twice, they all kind of scattered to get away.
Alice turned around to see Dana laughing histaricaly.
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Cute :) Perhaps a wee bit short. Thanks for writing !
shane likes poeple staying at her house haha uts like a chelter jaaja im liking the story
Oy vey! I really like the plot set-up but like in High School, these chick are clucking too fast. Shane and Carmen are ready to move in after meeting yesterday. LOL. But it’s all good. Alice is priceless! I think the plot needs more juice. But I can’t feel too bad cuz it’s high school and well…high school is like the pettiest 4 years of your life. LMAO! So um…keep it coming. Oh, when does the rumor mill kick into action? There’s gotta be rumors flying around about Shane, Papi and the everyone else :p Since Shane is such a star…what about the coach to the team? Something interesting could come from that eh? Oo, oo, what about the size of Shane’s house? With all the girls that are there between her and Papi and Jenny, that house must be huge. LOL. Like I said, the plot needs more descriptive juice. But…I really like the story.
i lovedddddddddd it , too short for sure but none the less i loved it. really really great.