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Just The Girl – Chapter Thirty Three (a HYD-inspired fic)
CHAPTER THIRTY THREE: Who’s Your Daddy?
From: Porter <3
Message: Hi baby :) Miss u alrdy :s Cant w8 2 c u l8r..
Should I? Tina Kennard asked herself for the fifth time as her thumb lingered over the reply button on her golden cell phone. Maybe I should just wait until she comes over before I tell her, she sighed as pressed the exit button and stared at the smiling picture of her girlfriend displayed on the small screen. But she might get mad because she told me to call her as soon as anything comes up, she ran a frustrated hand through her hair and rolled on her back on the bed. Still, I don’t want to make her worry and ditch the fund raising event, she groaned as she closed her eyes and clutched the cell phone tightly against her chest. God, she exhaled loudly, what should I do?
For the past few minutes, Tina had been debating to herself on whether it was a good idea to text or call her girlfriend and tell her that her asshole of a father paid them a visit this afternoon. Sure, she was determined to rag about Melvin as soon he left their apartment.. but a thought came up inside her head and stopped her just in time before she pressed the green call button to talk to Bette. It dawned on her how impulsive and irrational the hotheaded brunette could be when angry. And she was afraid that Bette would do something that would further compromise the already shaky relationship she had with her father and further push the prick to lash out against them even more.
“No.” Tina said determinedly as she made a decision. She would tell Bette about it personally, that way, she would be able to calm the brunette down when the inevitable Porter temper flares out. She would soothe, reassure and play the part of the calm and collected girlfriend. But until then.. she would have to do something first. She flipped open the phone and started typing..
To: Porter <3
Message: Miss u 2 babe. Hurry back 2 me when u’r done. Luv u.
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(4 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
OMG! What a fantastic ending! The girls are so far ahead of that devil Melvin it isn’t even funny! Your story is so warm and wonderful! Thanks for sharing it with all of us!
This story just keeps getting better!!! Poor Bette hit the ground again!!!! Thanks PPS
lol Porter fainting twice:)) oh n the F4 they r great go gals. Enjoy ur trip but please please post two chapter in case u can’t find internet connection tom, dis way u r covered beforehand :))Many thanks
Love this story, have a good trip Alchemy10 but please come back soon lol,I am addicted to this story
Sneaky job F4-seems they are one step ahead of Melvin. Good for them. I loved that Tina’s father scared the shit out of Bette-that was so funny. Awesome job!!!!
Melvin’s hitting obstacles at every turn, isn’t he? Go F4! And Bette fainting cos she’s scared of Ken is too funny… Loved the chapter, have a good weekend and we’ll all be (im)patiently waiting for the next post. Thanks!
I’m so addicted to this story! Bette’s is scared of Tina’s dad and with good reason, woah! but he did tell her to call him dad:) and Melvin is in for one hell of a surprise I can feel it! on to the next chappy:)
i am so addicted to this story, its the first one i read each time i log on, and i luv each and every chapter, great, great job!!!!!!u rock!!!!!!!!!
I’m loving this history so much. It’s original and well written.
Hey! Thank for another Great Chapter! Tina’s dad cracked me up…he was so funny.
” going away for an overnight trip tomorrow ” – Have fun, we’ll be here whining… I mean ‘waiting’! ;-)
Ha..looks like the F4 have all the base cover. Hope all their plans work! Loving your story. Thanks for sharing. Have a good weekend.
That was funny, poor Bette, scared of Tina’s dad, ok now let see the game began!
The F4 and their accomplices are putting a serious kibosh on Melvin’s plans. I LOVE IT!