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Who’s Shane McCutchoen?
Shane and Carmen were sitting in the sofa after the thugs retreated. Shane couldn’t understand why this amazing rich, beautiful woman even cared to save her life and pay the debts incurred by her notorius twin sister.
But Shane was grateful and wanted to help her out. In all this commotion she forgot to ask her name.
Shane:"I am sorry but I don’t know your name yet?"
Carmen:"Oh…sorry I am Carmen, Carmen de la pica Morales"
Shane:"you probably know already…I am Shane McCutcheon"
Carmen:"Well its better to know from the real person"
Shane:"Could you show me where you found Jordan when you first came into the house…because I think my passport and all my other documents are still there"
Carmen:"Sure"
They collected all Shane’s papers and passport.
Shane:"Do you want me to drop you off at your house"
Carmen:"No I don’t want to go home right now like this"
Shane didn’t notice before, but Carmen had a busted lip.
Shane:"I can see if you can get a room in the motel where I am staying"
Carmen:"I would really like that" Carmen said with a smile.
’God! she has just a sweet smile, how can that demon Jordan hit her’ Shane thought to herself.
Shane:"Let’s go then"
When they reached the motel it was late and a Friday so there weren’t any room left in the motel.
"There isn’t any room left in this motel….do you want me to drive to another one to see if we can find room or do you wanna go home?" Shane asked laying down all the options.
"No no I don’t wanna go home….I don’t want to stay alone either….uhmm….Shane? do you mind if I stay in your room for tonight?"
Carmen wasn’t really sure if she should ask that…but Shane was different from Jordan….the way she stood up for Carmen…when the thugs came…made Carmen feel protected, even though she didn’t know her. Although Shane was Jordan’s twin, she was much different from Jordan, she was a bit more tall and dressed like a rockstar far from Jordan’s all suited-booted dress code. When Carmen first looked at her bright green orbs, she felt at home….a feeling that was never there when she was with Jordan.
Shane:"Sure …you can stay…let’s go then"
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The nervous Shane is always adorable. haha