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Birthday Surprise – (Chapter: Part 1 of 2: A Private Show)
I think about what Kyla said as Ashley being the gayest one. I remember the gift today and try to put some of the pieces together. I’ve always known she was a lesbian (or basically one, if she had to label herself at all) and it never really bothered me. I never tried to analyze it in the context of how she’s been making me feel lately. And now with this present, something so important to her, she gave to me. I have her heart. Why did what she wrote in that note mean so much to me? I read it over and over, over 20 times since I got it. It’s her heart. And it belongs to me.
I get up to go to the bathroom and clear my head. I splash cold water in my face and tell myself not to think about her for the rest of the night. Whatever this is, we’ll resolve it tomorrow when we hang out. When I come back everyone is staring at me with a poorly hidden grin on their face.
“What the? What did you guys do!” I demanded. “You guys are the worst bunch of people at trying to be inconspicuous so come out with it!”
Everyone looks at each other and back to me and finally Aiden speaks up, “well don’t be mad but…”
I roll my eyes, I already had the happy birthday singing embarrassment when my family took me out to dinner, but how can you do that at a strip club? “Out with it Aid!”
He looks to the group for support but gets nothing. “Ok. Don’t be mad but we all pitched in to buy you a lap dance and I know that you think strippers are kinda nasty but we told the girl to get you the best dancer in the place and she said there’s one that only does private shows she doesn’t get on stage so none of us will know who it is but it’s your 18th birthday so you have to get a lap dance and she even gave me a discount even though it’s the best girl and if you’re nervous you can take a shot or here,” he pulls out a bandana, “you can blindfold yourself so you won’t be as nervous.” He stops and takes a deep breath. “The best part is her name is Sinamon, like cinnamon but starts with Sin!” He grins and looks up at me expectantly.
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it was kinda weird cuz today this girl i know turned 18, but she’s only buying a lotto ticket. maybe. but, oh wow that was good. i can’t wait for pt. 2 to see what spencer does. oh, and btw, dont be absurd! this was really good, of course we wanna see a part 2! haha.
Very, very good. Can’t wait to see how it all works out….hope the second part will be up real soon!
Um..yeah, babe, part two now. very very hot, part two right the fuck now
yeah. what stix said.
AGREED! Post part two!
you should definitly continue that sucks that neither got off but than again ashley just realized who she was ‘dancing’ for and spencer now knows it was ashley, wonder how the next part will go
oh my my maya :) god yes! post more SOON! this story ROCKS! awesome description/details of the whole lap dance scene- i could so see it! i just HAVE to know what happens next! :)
Holy dear lord…. Please I am begging u. Post REALLY soon please!!!
oh emm gee loved it! u have to keep going i wanna kno hat spencer does. it was a great ending of the chapter PMS hurry hurry hurry lol
holy hell if that didn’t remind me of my first lap dance! and it was on my birthday too! awesome job, I’m gonna read part 2 in a bit, but I loved this! fucking hot hot hot!
Damn! I should have gone to a strip club for my 18th birthday. Haha. Just kidding. Anyway. That was amazing and I can’t wait for part II.
continue continue continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you cant stop there!!!!!
Oh my god more!!!more!!!
excuse me while i pick my jaw up off the floor..you know how you watch movies and you yell at the people on screen cause they’re oblivious to whats going on??..throughout the whole strip club scene i’m reading and shouting (in my head) the whole time “ASHLEY IS A STRIPPER! OMG ASHLEY IS THERE! SPENCER IT’S ASHLEY!”..hahahaha..and i just about flipped at the ending and then remembered it’s only part 1…sooo with that said..the 2nd part needs to go up now..that was totally hot..LOVE it..
I’m going to second stix’s comment. And really… part two right now. Really.
that was really good! So hot! I was hoping the stripper was Ashley haha. Can’t wait for part 2 pms!!!
That’s great! Hurry up and write part 2! LOL!