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Taking the Long Way – (Chapter: 29: California Stars)
I laughed. “I am not going to throw you into the ocean….right now. I was wondering if you had a lighter?”
“Uhhh. Nope gave up that nasty habit.” She replied.
“Well that’s good, but I still need something to light the fire.”
“You found stuff to burn?” She asked incredulously.
“Yeah, city girl I found plenty of stuff for a fire.” I teased back. She stuck her tongue out at me.
“Is that a threat or a promise?” I asked with a smirk. She just wriggled her eyebrows at me and went back to tuning her guitar.
I opened the car door and noticed that there was a cigarette lighter in the dash. I pushed it in hoping that it was wired. It popped back out 30 seconds later and I noticed it was red hot as I pulled it out.
“Ash, come on!” I said sprinting back down to the beach before it cooled off. By the time Ashley joined me I had a small flame going.
“Nice work Spence!” She said setting down the bag with our blankets and other stuff.
I cracked my knuckles. “I know.” I said cockily.
She shook her head at me. I checked the temp on the car cigarette lighter making sure it was cool and then put it the bag after pulling out the blankets. I didn’t want to loose any piece of that car. I spread out the blanket and we sat down next to each other. Ashley rested her head on my shoulder and we listened to the crackling of the fire.
“So you promised to teach me to play that thing.” I said nodding to the guitar. Ashley hopped up and grabbed the guitar. She sat down behind me and wrapped her legs around me so she could be as close as possible.
“Mmmm. I like this lesson already.” I said.
“Focus, Spencer.” She whispered just behind my ear. My skin shivered and got goosebumps. Focus..right.
She settled the guitar in my lap and put her arms around me and her hands on the strings.
“Now just put your hands over mine and follow me for a bit.” She said.
This was quite possibly the sexiest thing I had ever done with any girl…with clothes on that is. I wanted to learn to play badly, so I forced my mind to focus on the instructions Ashley was giving to me and not her warm body pressed up to my back.
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OMG, this has to be the most awesome story on this site. Beautifully descriptive words that sends the reader over the edge, just as you have written: We had been pushing each other right to the edge and we need to feel the fall badly. SEXY HOT! I LOVE THIS STORY! Please, I beg of you, PMS!
That was great!
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once again, i get SUPER excited at seeing this story posted, and once again… it does not disappoint… FANTASTIC and i can’t wait for the next one!!
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