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Taking the Long Way – (Chapter: 29: California Stars)
I sighed and closed my eyes. I was happy to let her hands do anything they wanted to me.
What they wanted was me naked, because she moved them quickly down to the hem of my t-shirt and pulled it over my head. She pushed my already unclasped bra over my shoulders and kissed the bare skin at the base of my neck and shoulder. She wrapped her arms around me again and gently pulled me down with her on the blanket so that my back was still to her. She let her hand trace lightly down my spine and over my hip to the front of my jeans. She undid the button and pulled down the zipper. She left it at that and moved her hand around to my back again.
She pushed my shoulder gently so that I rolled from my side to my stomach. I crossed my arms and laid my head in them. I felt her straddle me and sit on my butt. She leaned forward slowly dragging her chest up my back. I could feel her nipples through her tank grazing along my skin. My back has always been extremely sensitive and the sensation was driving me wild.
“Ash…” I gasped.
“Yes?” She whispered in to the skin at the base of my neck. The rush of hot air and vibration of her lips made my skin shiver.
“That feels incredible.” I moaned. “Please don’t stop.”
“I haven’t even started yet.” She whispered gently nipping my earlobe. Oh God…I was so glad to hear that this was going to be one of those extremely long, drawn out sex sessions she was so good at. She pushed away from me and ran her short finger nails firmly down my back. I bit into my arm to stifle the moan. I felt her tank drop on to my face. I pushed it away and tried to turn around to look at her. She placed both her hands on my shoulders keeping me pinned.
I felt her lower her self down to me again. Her upper body ran up my back. This time there was nothing between us. It was skin on skin and the feel of her nipples on my back was driving me mad. Every nerve ending in my back was on fire and it felt fucking incredible. It was mind wrecking trying to anticipate where she would touch me next and when she did it was always a surprise making my skin shiver. Out of the blue sensations like her breasts pressing into me, her hair cascading down from a gentle kiss or firm nails running down broke up the light caresses of her finger tips that were constantly making patterns on my back. All of this left me gasping and moving underneath her. I could feel her heat through my jeans and all I wanted was to get those jeans of so that I could have that hot skin on me.
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OMG, this has to be the most awesome story on this site. Beautifully descriptive words that sends the reader over the edge, just as you have written: We had been pushing each other right to the edge and we need to feel the fall badly. SEXY HOT! I LOVE THIS STORY! Please, I beg of you, PMS!
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Great Update. Keep up the good work. I can’t wait for the next chapter. PMS real Soon.
OMG, this has to be the most awesome story on this site. Beautifully descriptive words that sends the reader over the edge, just as you have written: We had been pushing each other right to the edge and we need to feel the fall badly. SEXY HOT! I LOVE THIS STORY! Please, I beg of you, PMS!
That was great!
Great Update. Keep up the good work. I can’t wait for the next chapter. PMS real Soon.
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beautiful.
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one hell of a guitar leason, perfect ending with the quote from the song…pms
one hell of a guitar leason, perfect ending with the quote from the song…pms
Damn I went to bed at 3am and it is 6:51am when do these people sleep lol….I love this story so much seriously love it love it love it. I always look up the song that people put in their story and let it play why i read it and i loved this. Not to mention hott. I am definately a fan of sex on the beach.
Damn I went to bed at 3am and it is 6:51am when do these people sleep lol….I love this story so much seriously love it love it love it. I always look up the song that people put in their story and let it play why i read it and i loved this. Not to mention hott. I am definately a fan of sex on the beach.
OMG so beautiful. I felt like crying. I love this. I really love this.
OMG so beautiful. I felt like crying. I love this. I really love this.
once again, i get SUPER excited at seeing this story posted, and once again… it does not disappoint… FANTASTIC and i can’t wait for the next one!!
once again, i get SUPER excited at seeing this story posted, and once again… it does not disappoint… FANTASTIC and i can’t wait for the next one!!
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Damn it I’ve been playing guitar for 7 years now and that has never happened to me! PMS it was great
Damn it I’ve been playing guitar for 7 years now and that has never happened to me! PMS it was great