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You and Me – (Chapter: Confrontations)
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The sweat was sliding from her temple down her cheek which was tinged pink with exertion. Her fists made a whooshing sound as they cut through the air before connecting with the faded red punching bag. Punch. Jab. Uppercut. Hook. Combinations of destruction flowed outwards as she took out her aggression on the inanimate object. She hit with the grace of a ballerina dancing on stage. She was poetic violence in motion.
The sheen of salty liquid reflected off of the backyard lights and made her glow like some ethereal war goddess, beating the living hell out of a victim who dared challenge her. In truth, the punching bag was sporadically morphing into individuals that had succeeded in pissing her off by one way or another.
Gideon, with his piercing blue eyes had made her love life next to a chore as he bickered and fought with her over Madison. The Latina clearly expressed that his feelings for her weren’t reciprocated but he never stopped pining over her, never lost hope that one day she would ditch his sister for him. In the interim, he seemed to do all he could to frustrate Dano to no end with insults and snide remarks about her not being able to satisfy Madison both emotionally and otherwise.
Her brother, who managed to conjure up this irritating arrogance whenever he was with a group of people, though he never talked down to her in front of the crew so that her position as his right hand wouldn’t be compromised. Still, when it was just the two of them, he treated her like the shit on the bottom of his shoe and then apologized afterwards and everything was fine until he pulled the same routine over again.
She gave him a punch to the gut for good measure.
Skinny Jim, with his beady little eyes, excessive weight, and narcissistic personality was now on the receiving end of her anger. His condescending talk about her sexual orientation rang in her ears and made her eyebrows furrow in frustration. Sexist, bigoted, traitor. His betrayal reached beyond the realm of forgivable and buried itself into the malicious part of her where it festered and spread, giving sustenance to her brutality and bitterness. She would love nothing more than to see him dead in a trashcan.
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HAHA! i KNEW there was gonna be an ass whippin comming to madison…it was just a matter of time…omg it was pretty funny too…although not as violent and dramatic as i wished….w/e…im glad with the way this chapter came out. And as for ima bearclaw…shes way cool…im totally lovin the way shes raising her kids, i wish my mom was like her…it’d be cool…you gotta gimmie more…i need it…its my addiction…officially. POST MORE SOON!
great chapter…as usual ;-)actually, i can’t remember a single one that isn’t!!! lol…and that was pretty intense here…feel like something big’s coming…uhgg! the suspence is killing me!!!but it’s good how you put it…so funny when Ashley beat “the living shit” out of Madison…*smile with satisfaction*
intense arises from within and intensive comes from outside…you captured both.
HAHA! i KNEW there was gonna be an ass whippin comming to madison…it was just a matter of time…omg it was pretty funny too…although not as violent and dramatic as i wished….w/e…im glad with the way this chapter came out. And as for ima bearclaw…shes way cool…im totally lovin the way shes raising her kids, i wish my mom was like her…it’d be cool…you gotta gimmie more…i need it…its my addiction…officially. POST MORE SOON!
great chapter…as usual ;-)actually, i can’t remember a single one that isn’t!!! lol…and that was pretty intense here…feel like something big’s coming…uhgg! the suspence is killing me!!!but it’s good how you put it…so funny when Ashley beat “the living shit” out of Madison…*smile with satisfaction*
intense arises from within and intensive comes from outside…you captured both.
HAHA!! Finally, Madison got what she frickin’ deserved! Loved the fights…man tension everywhere.I loved the scene between Dano, Nessa, & Mama Bearclaw…that was sweet. LoL, Nessa calling Dano “gross ass” priceless. Reminds me of my relationship with my 4 siblings. Sweet job hon! Post soon please!
HAHA!! Finally, Madison got what she frickin’ deserved! Loved the fights…man tension everywhere.I loved the scene between Dano, Nessa, & Mama Bearclaw…that was sweet. LoL, Nessa calling Dano “gross ass” priceless. Reminds me of my relationship with my 4 siblings. Sweet job hon! Post soon please!
lifelong platonic partners songs good to me..lol..this chapter was great as usual..this fic has me on the edge of my seat scared for all..i don’t see how it can end good…keep us updated…love ya mucho
lifelong platonic partners songs good to me..lol..this chapter was great as usual..this fic has me on the edge of my seat scared for all..i don’t see how it can end good…keep us updated…love ya mucho