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    A Christmas Carol – Porter Style Ch 6

    Story written on December 23, 2009 by Tazgolf74.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=74733
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    Angie’s prognosis is revealed.

    Laughing Tina kissed her daughter’s forehead and released her from the tight hold. Returning her attention to the doctor she asked, “When can I take her home?”

    “I don’t see why she could not be released today. I’ll go make the arrangements. You should remember that we will still need to keep an eye on this young lady, and do regular follow ups, but I would say this is the best news we could have hoped for. Merry Christmas Tina.”

    “Merry Christmas Dr. Jones and thank you again,” was all Tina could say in response.

    Tina turned to Angie and gave her the good news. “Angie we can go home sweetie. Come and help me pack up your things so we can go.”

    “OK Mommy.”

     

     

    Later that night……..

     

    Bette sat back in her chair. What a day. The dream last night, the hospital with the kids this morning, Tina Kennard. Now there was one she did not understand at all. What had happened earlier? That touch, the electricity between them. This didn’t make sense. No one had ever had this effect on her. She just could not get Tina Kennard off her mind.

    She closed her eyes as her thoughts drifted to the scene from the dream of Tina holding that teddy bear.

    It was then that she heard a voice behind her…….”Well, I see that you have had quite the busy day. That was a very nice gesture that you made at the hospital with the toys.”

    That voice…..she was back……. Bette turned in her chair and there sitting in a chair across from her desk sat Mrs. Smith…..the “cleaning lady”.

    “You know I don’t who or what you are, but that dream last night; it scared the crap out of me.”

    A light hearted chuckle came back in response. “Are you sure it was a dream?”

    “Of course it was a dream……wasn’t it?” Suddenly I wasn’t so sure.

    “Bette, last night was simply a way of showing you how selfish and inconsiderate you had become. So many people struggle on a daily basis, but you never take notice. You always just think about you and only you.”

    Bette didn’t argue. Everything the woman in front of her said was true. What could she possibly say in her own defense?

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    1. Gosh I love this story and am so glad that Bettes eyes have been opened. And now it looks as though her heart too will be opened to love and the possibility of a beautiful family in her future. Thanks for posting. Merry Charistmas to you and yours.

    4. What a great surprise this lunchtime. You posted a chapter my friend and brightened up my day in the office. I will read it now and comment again shortly. And it looks like I am first to comment for once.

    5. As promised here I am again. I loved the chapter – Tina’s daughter going to be ok. Perhaps Tina and Bette will be OK when they realise that the electricity between them is the start of something big at a great time of year. Thanks Taz for taking the time to write this story and post it. I am looking forward to the next instalment tomorrow. Christmas greetings and love to you and P. Love K & A xx

    6. Hey now, look who I got to top on this fine morning! LOL! Hi spazzie, you have done an amazing job weaving our ladies into this classic holiday tale. I cannot wait for the next chapter, but I also don’t want to see this story end. Writing a story can be challenging enough, but when you add the element of history to it, it takes on an even greater challenge. You have done well my friend. Happy Holidays to you and P. Love me. xoxo

    7. Thanks for the update. I can see how the cleaning lady could be kind of addictive. Being able to foresee the future could really come in handy. I’m so glad Angie is gonna be okay. Can’t wait to see what happens at the Christmas dinner.

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