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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 48
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“How dare you put this on me?” Tina yells out, letting go of Bette’s eyes and walking up to Jack and spins him around.
“This isn’t anyone’s fault. Life and God meant that it was her time. She might have suffered because the emotional rollercoaster, but don’t you ever put this on me.” Tina screams in his face. If you are to put blame on anyone, blame yourself. You disowned your own daughter dad, kicked me out. I didn’t choose to fall for women, it just happened. And I’m happy dad, I love Bette so much it hurts sometimes. I thought that was what all parents wanted for their kids, love, safety and a happy life. I got that dad. Mom finally realized that, it took her 6 years, but she realized it. And I’m so happy I got to talk to her and clear the air before she passed away.” Tina says in a loud and shaking voice, she cries. Bette walks up to her from behind, she places her hand on Tina’s shoulder, to comfort her.
“Dad, I love you, and I know that deep down, you love me too, and I hope that you’ll be able to look passed what ever you are holding against me, and talk to me. I need a father in my life. I have needed you for 6 years.” Tina continues.
Jack stands there, his facial expression is blank. He shows no emotion, but he seems to listen.
“But I will not wait forever. There will come a time when I will not care anymore. I just hope for your sake that you will realize that soon. I am your daughter, parents are supposed to take care of, protect and love their children. You have failed in that. Your most important job in this world, and you failed.” Tina says. She knows that she maybe is being a little harsh, but she have to get through to her father.
She backs up closer to Bette. She takes her hand again and intervene their fingers.
I’m going to leave. I’ll be back for the funeral, and that will be the last time you’ll see me If that is what you want.” Tina says and turns around and leaves. They walk out to the car and gets in.
There, Tina breaks down.
“Oh baby.” Bette says, leaning over and pull Tina into a hug, stroking her back gently.
It breaks Bette’s heart to see Tina like this. She does her best to comfort her.
After a few minutes, they drive off towards their apartment in
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Wonderful update as alwasys Lauren…what an emotional rollercoster you are on with Tina….post soon
K
Great chapter, I hope T’s dad comes around.
did i hear someone say tears???? well……i have my own over this chappy….great…and very emotional….i love it ……keep goin
Lauren…I’m glad Tina asked Bette to stay. But I’m really glad Tina finally told her father what she wanted to tell him after 6 years. Hope he decides to accept Tina like her mother did. Thanks for the update…please continue.
FABULOUS CHAPTER LAUREN…HOPEFULLY DAD WILL GET OVER IT BEFORE HE KICKS THE BUCKET..THANKS FOR THE UPDATE…
very sad. and hard. thanks for the update.
wow..powerful..Tina need a break she is going through so much she deserve to be happy and have peace with Bette to enjoy their time together and about papa bear he deserved every word Tina said hope he change his mind and ask Tina for forgiveness i am glad Bette was at her side..ok amazing chappy i will wait for more tonight right?..lol :o)
very emotional chapter. love how tina stuck with bette and stood up to her father. hopefully it will sink into his thick skull and he will come around. If not too bad for him.
Unfortunately, Tina’s father is very much like the majority of str8 society. I have yet to figure out why it is such a big deal to them. What is so wrong with love….in any form?
Tina told him!!! I hope dad listens. Parents need their children just as much as we need them. Short, but it hit its mark.
Damn this is sad, and emotion. I like what Tina said to her father and hope he will listen to her. Post soon, thanks!
Lots of emotion. Good for Tina, she did her mother proud by standing up to her father. It reinforced what her mother was trying to fix when she found her way back to Tina.
way to go tina… i wonder if he knew her mom went to see her and they talked and made up… i hope he comes around… another great chapter
Here was a great piece of writing, Lauren, really it was.
The sadder thing to say is that it was particularly realistic and very acurately depicted. But that’s – alas -indubitable : Tina’s father is representative of too many people wor whom there has to be only one road to follow in life, the so-called “normal” one, and for whom even true love isn’t an “excuse”. I pity them, behind the anger, because they are people who denied the essential things in this world to only obey to blind “morality” rules. Even if they have to sacrifize their own family for that…
Now of course I hope this man will endly think about what the daughter he renounced has so rightly said to him.
Everything Tina’s said was absolutely right and if someone had to feel guilty for Mrs Kennard’s death, it would be this stobborn stoneheart man. Because his wife, too submissive to him and to society’s consideration, was secretely tortured all along these 6 years…
You also showed, on a beautifully subtle way, something essential here : the only presence of Bette next to her was enough to bring force to Tina and we all know she certainly wouldn’t have find so much strength to talk to her father the way she did if her beloved half wasn’t been there to give her her silent but powerful support.
Wonderful work, Lauren, intense and true. You master your story with talent, I mean it. Thank you !!
That was a hard, emotional chapter…and you painted the picture real well. I hope that her dad will come around, but Tina is right…she needs to put down her foot now.
I hope that you’re having fun at shool! Let us know how that is going. Kiitos!
highly emotional…