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A Good Investment- 25
“Bette really where are you?”
“I’m on my way I swear,” Bette said starting the car, she honked the horn “See?”
“Ok, well hurry up.”
“I’ll be there before you know it!” Bette promised.
“I’ll get your dress ready…” Tina sighed.
“Thanks babe…” Bette said hanging up. “Fuck, fuck FUCK!” Bette muttered, “I hope there’s no traffic…”
Bette ran inside the house, going pass Tina to the shower, she then came back. Kissing Tina’s cheek “Hi” She smiled running again. Tina walked in the shower, Bette was in a hurry, “Hi, glad you could make it” Tina dryly said.
“I’m so sorry… I mean the traffic… can you believe it?” Bette said walking in the shower.
“Bette… we need to be there in an hour!” Tina complained, Bette poked her head, “We will.” She promised, looking at Tina, “You look amazing babe.” She smiled warmly.
Tina could feel herself reacting “Bette, that’s not going to work…”
“Let me shower in peace woman!” Bette teased, “I have half an hour to get ready”
“Twenty minutes Bette!” Tina said leaving, “God, just for once be on time…” She mumbled.
Bette was blow-drying her hair. “Bette…. Come on!” Tina whined.
“Babe, I’m almost done… we’re fine.” Bette said not looking.
“God why do we always have to wait for you??”
“You sound like my father.” Bette smiled.
“I’m starting to understand his frustration…” Tina mumbled.
“Done!” Bette said.
“Finally!!! Lets go.”
“Sure,” Bette said “Let me just put on my make up…”
“Arggggg” Tina groaned.
“Ok, ok I’m done!” Bette said triumphantly.
“Really?” Tina said.
“Swear!”
Tina looked at her, “BETTE!!! You’re not dressed!!!” She groaned.
“Oh, I meant with my hair and make up… two minutes and I’m done, swear! You can get the car ready”
“Fine, I’ll go get the car” Tina rolled her eyes.
“See we’re not late!” Bette smiled, “Two minutes is not late.”
“Two minutes and five years off my life” Tina said.
“Oh, babe come here” Bette said kissing Tina.
“Arggg get off Bette! You’re wrinkling my dress!” Tina said pushing her over getting out of the car.
“Tina, wait! We need to go in together!” Bette yelled giving the keys to the valet. She went to Tina, “Babe, what’s wrong?”
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(61 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
Wow, that’s a heavy duty toffee obsession that Bette has there. Very cute Bette and Tina banter, but I’m still wondering why Katherine wanted them together and then wanted Tina to break up with Bette. What did Katherine hope to gain by them being married?
I think I’m in a toffee nightmare! Bette has gone way overboard but it is way too funny! and yes the party has just begun! Please may Tina & Bette leave together:) PPS
This is a hoot…
First part, *THUD* has to take a cold shower, damn that ws HOT!!! Second part, ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!! Bette is a Hilarious!!! I love her wit and humor, and the bantor is priceless. Katherine deserves the toffee nightmare. Actually, I think it’s creative. Love the story, please post the second part tonight, please!!
hilarious!!! drive katharine nuts with toffee on!!!! tina should stop worrying about her mom and have fun with bette.
I may have to go get some toffee..
Bette really does seem to have a toffee obsession well and a need to annoy the living crapola outta Katherine, LOL! I am glad that Tina calmed down a bit about Bette’s being late and hope she can hold on for the toffee ride. :)
VEry funny!!!! I love that Bette is going after Tina’s mom with the toffee. Tina needs to chill out. Thanks PPS
Just plain funny! It’s toffee madness.
so fucking funnyyyyyyy lol great. and 13 pages????? pink u RULE
I think I’m in toffee heaven with this chapter. WOW! The bike and afternoon delight was a total toffee treat! More soon I hope!
ROFL at bette and her toffee, bring on the rest! :)PPS
Just hilarious!! I hope katherine drowns in toffee. She’s like that spider that eats its young. PPS
omg that was funny and love Bette with her tofee party ahhaha