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A helping hand and a push in the right direction–CH. 15
A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 15
Wednesday night
Eli had convinced Bette to watch one of his skating dvd’s, and was cringing at all the different ways people seemed to be falling.
Bette: "um you did say they were professionals right?"
Eli: "Yeah different skaters skate for different sponsors, professionals skate for different teams kind of like pro sports but on smaller scales. Why?"
Bette: "Well they seem to fall a lot, and then they just get up and do it all over again."
Eli: "Yeah but they stick with it and eventually they land it. I think its cool that they show them falling. It shows that even the professionals fall, it gives hope to skaters who are starting out and falling on their butts every few minutes."
Bette: "I didn’t see it that way…but it looks so painful, doesn’t it look painful?"
Eli: "I like to see them wipe out. My uncle Ollie says it’s because I’m a boy."
Bette: "So do you do tricks like that?"
Eli: "No way they do sick tricks that I can only dream of landing, but I can do a few things. Hey Bette do you think we can go to a skate park I looked it up before coming down here and there are a lot in California, there are even some by the beach. I wrote them all down on a list."
Bette: "You want to go to one of these places tomorrow?"
Eli: "Can we?"
Oh no how does Tina ever say no to that face. That hopeful look on his face the silent pleading in his eyes, how could she possibly refuse him.
Bette: "Show me the list and if you get the okay from your mom we can go."
Eli: "Thank you so much Bette. I’ll be right back."
Bette was putty in his hands, but she loved to make him happy. She turned back to the t.v. and yet another skater was on the ground. But she had to admit they did perform some amazing looking tricks. Before she could get comfortable the phone rang. Bette paused the dvd and reached over to answer the phone.
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(48 votes, average: 3.75 out of 5)
Nice long chapter that was greatly appreciated. I just had a feeling that Eli would get hurt while skateboarding. Don’t make his injuries severe, please. We don’t want B & T’s reunion and summer at the beach ruined. ;-)
OMG….U ARE STOPPIN THERE???? I KNOW WE GOT ALOT OF PAGES TO READ…BUT…..COME ON……WE NEED MORE……AND SOON……THIS IS GONNA BE SOOO DAMN GOOD…..BRING IT ON….
what a place to stop…….how long b4 u update??????
Dont leave us in suspense like that! I love the way this story is going.
Loving this story. Keep up the good work. Post soon.
Next chapter please!!!!! I love this story……
Just when it was getting so good :P Update soon !! loving the story :)
Oh man, what a place to stop. I hope Eli is going to be alright. Please continue soon.. can’t wait for more! :)
Thanks for the long chapter. I had a feeling something was gonna happen at the skate park, hopefully it’s nothing serious. Please don’t let Tina flip out. Too bad her surprise was ruined. I hope Bette gets to spend alot of the summer at the beach house (with some NC-17 rated chapters) I am glad her and Eli are bonding so well. Please post soon.
Tina so better not blame Bette for this..she told Bette to let him do it. Hope Eli is gonna be fine.Post soon!!!
This is a heck of a way for Tina to come face to face with Bette. But this will also will allow her to see just how much Eli means to Bette. I hope that after Eli is taken care of the Bette and Tina get to spend some quality time together. Thanks for the post and anytime that you write is appreciated.
Um… Surprise?!?!
OMG….How could you just leave us like that. Please post soon and I hope T isn’t too upset or angry. We know accidents happen..especially with kids on skateboards. great chapter.
Awesome story, you threw in a little drama but I’m hoping that your story isn’t going to go the way of other stories and have Tina become a villian.
Great post, but please let little sweet Eli be ok. I’m glad that Tina is already in LA, when this happened. Post soon…
I’m so thankful that it doesn’t seem too be a life-threatening injury to Eli! I’m also glad that Tina is there. Please post soon–I love this story and appreciate the nice, long chapter to tide us over. Love between B & T will soon be rekindled!
Please Don’t let Tina get to mad at Bette. I hope Eli is going to be OK. Thank you Please Post Soon Great Chapter
Brilliant. I hope eli is ok. Tina’s suprise would have been perfect. I hope our girls will be fine, with this. Now i guess bette has to move in with tina to help out with eli, cause now she wont let eli out of her sight.Can’t wait for next chapter, thank you
excellent chapter with a little drama, i hope Eli will be well and he has minor lession, but finaly Tina is in LA i hope she won’t freak out and figth with bette because the accident!
i hope tina won’t freak out about eli and won’t blame bette..i hope eli will be better soon so B&T would have a nice reunion
Wow. Bette really has mellowed out. She apologized to the nurse for yelling at her. Now let’s see if Tina can stay cool and not flip out.
Great upadate and so happy that you let Tina get to CA right away. Don’t let her be made with Bette about the accident. But please let them get together and be really close right now for their own sake and for Eli’s. Please let them show their love for each other. Thanks for a great story.
Long chapter or one page we will take your story anyway we can. I love Eli and love how Bette is so in love with that child. She acts like a Mom. with her baby. Gee,if they had only done this sooner. Bette is smart but She still hasn’t seen the simalary with her name and Eli. thanks so much for posting thanks
Hope Eli is ok, this is getitng more excited!!!!!!!!!!!!