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    A helping hand and a push in the right direction–CH. 15

     

    Grace: "Hey sweetie I haven’t talked to you in awhile what’s up?"

     

    Alice: "I’m sorry to bother you but…"

     

    Grace: "What are you doing with my nephews phone?"

     

    Alice: "Grace this is Alice Pieszecki Tina’s friend from LA. I really need to talk to her, but she’s not answering her cell phone. I was hoping that you knew where she was."

     

    Grace: "She can’t be reached right now why do you need her?" Tina had made Grace promise not to ruin her surprise, and was told to lie if Eli called.

     

    Alice: "Eli was in an accident so if she’s in a meeting or whatever pull her out. I have to get a hold of her."

     

    Grace: "How bad is he hurt?"

     

    Alice: "Doctor said he has a concussion, and we don’t know about his arm yet. He went with the doctor to get some more tests, but I really need to find Tina. Can you help me or not?"

     

    Grace: "Yeah. If her phone is off then she must have turned it off for the flight. Do you have a pen and paper?"

     

    Alice: "What flight? Never mind I’ll remember the number go ahead."

     

    Grace: "It’s not a number it’s an address. Tina’s already in California she got in earlier today."

     

    Alice: "She’s already here?"

     

    Grace: "Yeah. She’s at a beach house she rented."

     

    Grace gave Alice the address, and Alice hurried back into the hospital.

     

    Alice: "Where’s Bette?"

     

    Dana: "The nurse let her wait in Eli’s room. She wanted to be there when he got back. Were you able to get a hold of Tina?"

     

    Alice: "Not exactly. I called Grace and she told me that Tina’s already in California. She took an earlier flight, she probably hasn’t turned her phone back on, but I have the address of where she’s staying so I’m going to drive down there and bring her."

     

    Shane: "Bette wanted to tell her."

     

    Alice: "Yeah well until Tina turns her phone back on the only way Bette can tell her is if she drives to her in person. And I seriously doubt you’ll be able to take Bette away from Eli."

     

    Dana: "I’ll go with you. The kids are looking a little tired we can probably stay at Tina’s. While Alice drives back to the hospital."

     

    Shane: "That sounds good…Anna you’re going to stay with Aunt Dana and your cousin Jack for a little while okay. Mommy has to stay with your Aunt Bette. I’ll see you soon honey."

     

    Alice: "We’ll be back soon."

     

    They hurried out to the car while Shane waited.

     

    The traffic was really light so Alice was able to find the beach house pretty quick with On-Star. She pulled up to the big house that Tina rented for the summer.

     

    Jack: "Wow mom this place is cool. Is this where Aunt Tina lives?"

     

    Dana: "Is it?" Dana said turning to Alice who was carrying Anna in her arms.

     

    Alice: "This is the address Grace gave me. Ring the doorbell baby. I need to get her to the hospital."

     

    Dana rang the doorbell and they heard a loud bark and a thump on the door.

     

    Dana: "I think we’re at the wrong house."

     

    They heard someone shooing the dog away, and then the door opened.

     

     

    TBC

    Comments

    1. Nice long chapter that was greatly appreciated. I just had a feeling that Eli would get hurt while skateboarding. Don’t make his injuries severe, please. We don’t want B & T’s reunion and summer at the beach ruined. ;-)

    2. OMG….U ARE STOPPIN THERE???? I KNOW WE GOT ALOT OF PAGES TO READ…BUT…..COME ON……WE NEED MORE……AND SOON……THIS IS GONNA BE SOOO DAMN GOOD…..BRING IT ON….

    3. Thanks for the long chapter. I had a feeling something was gonna happen at the skate park, hopefully it’s nothing serious. Please don’t let Tina flip out. Too bad her surprise was ruined. I hope Bette gets to spend alot of the summer at the beach house (with some NC-17 rated chapters) I am glad her and Eli are bonding so well. Please post soon.

    4. This is a heck of a way for Tina to come face to face with Bette. But this will also will allow her to see just how much Eli means to Bette. I hope that after Eli is taken care of the Bette and Tina get to spend some quality time together. Thanks for the post and anytime that you write is appreciated.

    5. OMG….How could you just leave us like that. Please post soon and I hope T isn’t too upset or angry. We know accidents happen..especially with kids on skateboards. great chapter.

    6. Awesome story, you threw in a little drama but I’m hoping that your story isn’t going to go the way of other stories and have Tina become a villian.

    7. I’m so thankful that it doesn’t seem too be a life-threatening injury to Eli! I’m also glad that Tina is there. Please post soon–I love this story and appreciate the nice, long chapter to tide us over. Love between B & T will soon be rekindled!

    8. Brilliant. I hope eli is ok. Tina’s suprise would have been perfect. I hope our girls will be fine, with this. Now i guess bette has to move in with tina to help out with eli, cause now she wont let eli out of her sight.Can’t wait for next chapter, thank you

    9. excellent chapter with a little drama, i hope Eli will be well and he has minor lession, but finaly Tina is in LA i hope she won’t freak out and figth with bette because the accident!

    10. i hope tina won’t freak out about eli and won’t blame bette..i hope eli will be better soon so B&T would have a nice reunion

    11. Wow. Bette really has mellowed out. She apologized to the nurse for yelling at her. Now let’s see if Tina can stay cool and not flip out.

    12. Great upadate and so happy that you let Tina get to CA right away. Don’t let her be made with Bette about the accident. But please let them get together and be really close right now for their own sake and for Eli’s. Please let them show their love for each other. Thanks for a great story.

    13. Long chapter or one page we will take your story anyway we can. I love Eli and love how Bette is so in love with that child. She acts like a Mom. with her baby. Gee,if they had only done this sooner. Bette is smart but She still hasn’t seen the simalary with her name and Eli. thanks so much for posting thanks

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