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A Part of Me
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Just then there was a knock at the door Steve got up and opened it
“Oh hey Brenda, come in, my don’t you look nice”
“Thank you Mr. Kennard, is Tina ready?” Brenda asked
“I don’t know I imagine she should be, she’s been upstairs for a while, why don’t you go and have a seat in the living room and I go get her”
Brenda walked back and immediately felt Bette’s stare checking her out from top to bottom
“Hi Mrs. Kennard Ms. Kit, Ms. Porter” Brenda said with an awkward wave
Kit smirked at Bette when Brenda again called Bette Ms. Porter
“Brenda please call me Bette”
“Ok, Bette”
“So, Brenda are you a safe driver? Since you’re driving I Imagine you’re not drinking right? Being under age and all I imagine there are not going to be drinks at this party correct?” Bette asked
Brenda was a bit taken aback with the questions Bette was asking her both Allison and Kit gave Bette a look of surprise.
“No, um Bette, I’m not planning on drinking, Shane’s foster parents are pretty strict so I imagine there’s not going to be any alcohol”
Tina and Mr. Kennard walked into the room and as soon as Bette saw Tina she stood up, Tina was wearing a very tight pair of low rise jeans that should off her nice ASS-ets , a red colored sleeveless satin top with a plunging neck line and a pr of suede knee high boots with a three inch heel that made her fine toned legs go on forever. Tina wore her hair down with a slight curl. Bette knew Tina was beautiful but before tonight Bette would have never described Tina as SEXY and HOT! Bette was taken aback she felt her knees go weak at the sight before her.
Kit got up as Tina was saying her good byes to her parents, Kit pulled on the hem of Bette’s blouse leaned in and whispered in her ear;
“Close you mouth baby sis, before you drool all over the place”
“Huh? What?” Bette stammered
“I said pick your jaw up off the floor” Kit giggled
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hey!I am soooo glad you posted a chapter of this storry of yours too!!!now I’m giong to read =)
Kit, Bette has already fallen for Tina. Bette go set Brenda straight, well you know what I mean…….. This is a great update, ilmuzic.
I love it!!!! Bette and Tina have know clue that they are in love with each other. I am glad Kit see it. Thank you Great Chapter!!!
I have to agree: great! I am looking forward to read more! =)
I like this story before but after that chapter I am hooked. Can’t wait to see where you take us with this. PPS
to late… bette has already fell for tina… and brenda… good call… you hit the nail on the head… great chapter… pps
Hook, line & sinker!
Bette is worse than Allison, Tina’s mother. I loved this story the first time I read and am enjoying it all over again.
I love this story! Bette was so cute with her jealousy thing going on and she doesn’t even know it! PPS
That was awesome and seeing Bette jealous always put a smile on my face and now she falling for Tina, thing will be more interesting here lol. Please post more, thanks!
Hi dear sweet Iluvmuzic! *waving* As we mentioned earlier, this story is such a delight. The plot is unveiling at a wonderful pace and the characters are very well integrated. We were touched by Bette’s cute jealousy with respect to Brenda and Shane. Indeed it seems Bette had been dormant about her true feelings about Tina. Guess we are in for what’s next on this incredible ride that you are taking us. A real joy to read, dear friend. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the loving JC, Eunichick, ZLFAN, T_Daze, Melrose231 and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
I am so loving this story. Thank you for posting. :)
I really enjoyed this post. Hooooo man!!! that was great. Some more please.
Put a fork in Bette…she’s done! Is it tomorrow yet? I’m ready for their Getty “date”! Thanks for sharing this great story.