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    All you need is love chapter 28

    Story written on June 21, 2007 by allyemmerson.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=65996
    Author Notes:

    Bette and Tina talk and they go home

    “You both deserve to be happy – just keep it that way “

     

    Any further conversation was stopped by Madison and Hannah running into the kitchen and

    launching themselves at Shane wanting to tell her all about their great time. Shane allowed herself to be dragged off with good nature.

     

    Tina had been telling herself all day that with her daughters out of the way she could spend some time seriously getting on with the final three chapters of her book, plus she could have quality time alone as well as getting down and dirty with Bette. But when the clock ticked over to 6pm and all the girls were sitting watching TV and waiting for their daddy she thought her heart would break without her three angels dominating the house with their screams and laughter and incredible sense of fun. She swallowed a huge lump in her throat when she heard the car pull up outside the house but was determined not to show any tears – when she was with Bette she knew that she would understand and hold her while she cried.

     

    “That’s dad – come on “

     

    Tina stood up and smiled as Madison and Hannah leapt up and raced to the door. Rebecca got up with less enthusiasm.

     

    “Come on sweetie “

     

    “He’s only doing this because of what Bette did for us. “

     

    “Whatever you think Becky – he loves all three of you “

     

    “Do you think he still loves you?” she asked suddenly

     

    “He cares about me because I am the mother of his three daughters. I will always have something special with him – but we have both moved on “Tina’s reply was honest.

     

    “Bette makes you really happy “it was a statement. Tina nodded

     

    “Yes she does – do you really approve of us – I know it must be hard especially for you when you are used to seeing me and your dad. And the others only really understand little bits of what has happened recently. You have seen and learnt probably more than you should at your age “

     

    Rebecca picked up her bag and gave her mother with a smile.

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    1. Oh AllyE, wonderful story. I love the way you are telling this story. “Chewing the carpet,” huh, I love that analogy, and as Garfield says, “I resemble that remark.” Truly understand how she was feeling. Love it. pps.

    3. YOu go Bette. I still don’t see what Ollie is so bothered by . The dude left his wife and children for a guy. He’s happy why can’t Tina be. Ollie you so need to get over yourself. Slapping would be good. Alice needs to let Bette tell her own story, she’ll get their.

    7. Totally awesome Ally! Alice may feel the need to ‘discuss’ things with Bette, but I don’t think she thought it through very well before she started in at this given time and place. Alice should have waited until she and Bette had more privacy before she went about bursting Bette’s bubble. I love the way Tina put it – concentrating on their future together is what’s important. Bette talking about Emily with Tina will come in time. Alice trying to force Bette into a corner about it will bring no good to anyone. I know Tina can’t wait to be in Bette’s bed tonight. Ollie needs to stop showing his ass. You would think he would take this opportunity to show Tina that he is happy for her – considering all the misery he has caused her. He owes Tina that much. I love your writing Ally. Thank you for posting such a lovely story.

    9. Ollie is such a b*rk. Honestly, how did Tina stand him long enough to even marry him? Bette’s got this battle won, hands down. He needs to find something else to do with his time. Selfish prat. Is his boyfriend Paul this insufferably vain as well? Me being this wound up is a barometer of how good the story is, ally. Post soon

    10. Hey Mate….just stopped by to leave a comment after I read this yesterday. Busy day as I mentioned in my e-mail back that I JUST sent..LOL! As for the story, I love the way Tina handled discussions with Bette. I also love that Tina was dishin’ with Shane! Post when ya can my friend and we’ll chat later! xx

    12. Now, THAT’S what I call “Drawing a line in the sand” and letting Ollie know what will happen when he crosses it. The only thing that was missing with the interaction between Bette and Ollie was her waiving goodbye to the kids. Now, THAT would have been rubbing it into Ollie’s face. It’s time that Paul reeled Ollie in some in reference to Tina. I loved the way that Tina handled Bette being upset. Her friends know how Bette was in the past when she was upset, but they have not seen how she and Tina interact and are supportive of each other. I think the change will surprise them all. This is a whole different chemistry between B&T and this will become ovious to the children, Ollie and all of their friends. NOw it’s time for Bette to go in and comfort her partner. Hey Ally, “You go girl” BRAVO and GREAT job here. :o)

    13. Dear Ally, Jo, Gumby, Chynsia, Cerdi, and all the ladies who write these fantastic stories on this site. I am in awe of all of u and send my blessing to u all for these unbelievable, incredible and beautiful stories. I have discovered this site only a few weeks ago and have been glued to my computer since then. I watched The L Word though its gives a good insight to lesbian’s life but I always wondered about many other aspects of this way of life, especially the physical relationship. Since reading these stories I feel as if I have gained years of experience, knowledge, confidence and much more. Thank u ladies, u r all distinguished excellent, incredible and talented individuals and my HREOS. Once again THANK U.

    15. Oooowee! I’d sure like to see some ass slapping! Glad that Bette calmed down. Glad that Becky calmed down. Waiting to see if Ollie will calm down.

    16. What the hell crawled up Ollie’s ass and died? If he and Bette weren’t at odds he probably wouldn’t have minded that Tina didn’t call. Also, and this isn’t the first time I’ve thought (and probably not the first time it’s been said), but it seems like Ollie thought he could have his cake and eat it too. He cheated on Tina, they split up and he moved on with Paul. Yet he perhaps thought Tina would just stay single? Tina’s a very patient woman I think. It’s so tempting to know all the details of Bette and Emily’s marriage, especially after Alice spoke to her. But Tina’s letting Bette set the pace for that discussion. True class act. Looking forward to your next post!

    17. Oh my God, I can’t believe that I’m almost firs and most important that I finally got the courage to write!!. I’m from Argentina and two years ago after the firs season of the L word ended I though, “Wow I have to see more about this”. So thanks god internet exist, I discovered this site and the firs story I red was yours.(It was very funny because I didn’t understand and though it was a real chapter.I’m so naive!) And after that moment I’ve become a very big fan of yours and from other writers like Jo or Gumby. So please, keep writing like this, you are a genious!!!

    20. Tina’s reaction was absolutely perfect, just reland Ms. Porter to Earth after hitting Mach20 on the anger scale. Ally, great as always, how do you do it? you’re the greatest! Post when you can.

    22. Hey mate, Im very happy with the comments you got this time. Its wonderful to see the girls telling you how great your writing is. :) I liked how this chapter ended and all of it but I can surely say I liked even more the comments you got. Keep up the good work, dear. xxx

    23. Damn. Bette is ready to thrown down alpha style over her woman. Glad Tina could calm her down. She is a much better woman than I would be if she doesn’t want insight into Bette’s marriage. But it is a good thing. Love this story.

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