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An epistolary affair
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I approached you with a smile, and lifting my hand to your face, I swept the offending cream with my index finger. But just as I was withdrawing my hand, you caught my wrist. I looked into your eyes, and what I saw made my heart race. Not taking your eyes off me, you slowly brought my finger to your mouth and sensually licked the ice cream. For a few seconds, I literally stopped breathing…
You cleaned off my finger, and just when I thought you were going to release it, I felt your tongue slowly dance over the tip of the digit still held captive between your lips. The warmth that spread through my body in that moment made me blush, and I knew that the sensations that your actions had generated in me were not so chaste anymore. And the look in your eyes told me the feeling was mutual and intended.
I couldn’t help myself… I took my finger from your mouth, and holding your face, I replaced it with my lips… You responded fully to my assault, and opened your legs to allow me to stand closer to you near the parapet.
That kiss was much more passionate than the first one, and I was overwhelmed with the tension that was quickly growing between us… As I devoured your lips, I realized that the more I kissed you, the least I could get enough of you.
We were both breathing heavily when our lips finally let go, but we remained close, with our foreheads almost touching as we tried to settle our breathing. After a while, I raised my head and looked at you. You were smiling, but I could feel the intensity in your eyes. And also something else… Desire.
Against my will and the screaming of my body, I took a step back and put some distance between us. Not too much… But just enough… Then I took your hand and without a word, I helped you down the parapet, inviting you to resume our walk.
We spent the rest of the afternoon in the Marais. We visited the small courtyards, hidden, unsuspected, in between the walls of ancient buildings and townhouses. We admired the galleries, entered the small designer shops and second-hand booksellers. We went to the Place des Vosges and I showed you the house of Victor Hugo…
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Oh I hope they aren’t going to be apart for too long! Thanks for the post. You 2 are doing a fantastic job with this!
Madam, for your Bette, my Tina will climb the highest mountain, swim the deepest ocean and cross the warmer deserts! For you have depicted the most tender, loving and incredibly romantic character there is. Can I really confess to being jealous of a fictitious character! Well you what I will…..I confess I am jealous of Tina! There is about a million places in your letter where my heart has jumped and until the very last line my heart was pounding as hard as the hearts of these two, were! This is how outstanding this piece was! You are unbelievably talented and I thank you too for agreeing to co-write with me! xxxx
That was incredibly awesome. And that was before I even reached the love scene. I love the role play in the garden you can only be that silly with the people you love easily able to let your guard down without no hesitation. Wow I don’t know how I’m going to go on until the next post. You both are doing a wonderful job. Can I just say Kword this is the best chapter you have written and that’s why it was probably the hardest.
Your letter was a full romantic circle! In Paris and in love!
Absolutely magnificient!!!! Both of you continue to amaze me with your writing and this letter just took my breath away with its love, the playfulness in the garden completely and totally laced with love, gallantry and the wondrous romance of a time period gone by. Can’t you just see Bette in one of the uniforms of the Musketeer emblazoned with the crest of the House of D’Artagnan, with the sword of her father and his hat doused while in a low bow to her Queen, her Royal Highness Christina. Beautiful chapter. Can hardly wait for more because you continue to outdo the last letter. This story must somehow be made into a book for all to enjoy. It would be a number one best seller. Truly beautiful love story. Thanks for posting.
Thud!…. *_* Kword… Even though I got bump in the head after hit the floor because of reading this, I would be still happily smile afterward! … :-D This one is simply blow me away! Those cute silliness of the role play and the love declaration inside the private garden… And the playfulness of Tina which is so endearing yet so romantic when left Bette the sketch-which maybe will become the first art in display inside the Bette Porter gallery? ;-)… OMG.. I would read this again later during the day, and looks like I would never get tired to re-read this letter! I guess Tina “herself” would treasure it more ;-) and about the tips of the places in Paris… Thanks! It’s inspirational! We’ll have one route under the title of this story – “epistolary route” … Let’s just hope that nobody is being arrested for breaking the rule by jumping over to closed area :-p lol … This story is getting better and better … And again, you two fabulous writers are really amazing!! :-) you two made me wondering: is romantic part of your genes or what…?? ;-) Looking forward to the next letter… :-)
Awesome as always.
That was just aboslutely romantic and beautiful. Damn that was good. Excellent thank you.
That was insanely hot but so beautiful.
That was so beautiful and so elegantly written. The scene in the garden, the delicate loving, all so sweet and moving. Thank you.
“Then do just that, Bette… Love me.” I’M JEALOUS TOO!..I WANT UR BETTE!.. Kword..
Paris is such a beautiful and romantic city
Another amazing letter! I am loving this series of letters. Thank you for posting.
I have tears in my eyes… This is so beautiful yet painful and… that’s a combination I love. I love this story! PPVS
Beautiful.Thank you.PPS
God, Kword. That was probably one of the most romantic letters ever written. It had everything from being funny, to sexy, to sweet, to flirty, to just so heartfelt. I’m in love with your Bette…fanfic or not!
Hi Kword, That was so beautiful and majestic. There was love bound up with every word, sentence and scene. It is true romance; heartfelt and wonderfully realized. More please and many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
The smile on my face is huge. Laughter tears romance love and much more all in 1 piece. Ty so much for this. so brillant. :)