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Angel Fire – 11
“How about having a drink at my apartment?” Said the young man whose name Bette could not now remember.
He often asked this as the evening was about to end and Bette had always refused. But tonight she was ready for sex. She had been to a gynecologist that her roommates visited; getting pregnant would have been a disaster. It was good, she thought, that she was being calculating about having sex because it gave her time to take care of herself medically.
“Ok,” she said.
“Huh?” He was so started by her answer that he thought he had misunderstood her.
“Let’s have a drink at your apartment.”
He was uncharacteristically quiet as they walked to his apartment, but was walking a little faster than usual. Bette watched with detached amusement as he fumbled with the key to his door and had hands that shook when he opened two beers.
The alcohol of choice at his apartment was beer and he downed his beer quickly and then waited for her to finish. He watched her consume the beer like a character in a bad movie who had put poison in someone’s drink and is watching them to make sure they consume the drink and the poison.
Bette thought he was hoping this would get her high enough so she would go to bed with him. She could have let him know right away that she was going to have sex with him, but chose instead to let him wonder.
Finally, he began kissing her and, for the first time, she began responding in a way she thought denoted passion. She allowed him to take over and he soon began undressing her. He moved them into the bedroom and when he had stripped her completely naked, he pushed her on the bed.
While she watched, he straightened back up and removed his clothes quickly. He had an erection which fascinated her. She had never seen a naked man before, although she had seen some pictures…mostly art, not much pornography. Much art, though, showed the limp penis which was usually small. She remembered one of her roommates looking at one of her art books that had a photograph of Michelangelo’s David.
“This David guy wasn’t very well hung, was he?” Judy, the physics major, had observed.
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(49 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
Great great story! So curious how Bettes life must have been… Great that you are filling in the gaps LOL THANKS!
Thank you for this fascinating journey into Bette’s erotic past. Did Bette consider a surrogate as opposed to a courtesan?
really like how you are writing about Bette’s initiation to sex.
really interesting…bette sounds just like me…i was dissapointed too…i’m glad their are talking because tina would be curious forever
This is a very enlightening story. To get a look even if it is FF into the world of Bette Porter. I can’t wait to read more about her.
Meg Ryan…ahhhhh…was more into her than Tom Cruise, myself. update soon.can’t wait.
hmmmmmm… i love this story… glad tina laid down the law and bette has to spill it… looking forward to the next chapter
Nice opening, please continue with B’s history…..
Neither Tom Cruise or Meg Ryan moved me; I was into Kelly McGillis *_*………I’m glad Tina put her foot down; now its time to really find out how Bette lesrned to show us what she’s workin’ with!!
Pancha, this is good, really looking forward to the next installment of Bette’s Sexual Education.
You write in such an interesting and clear manner that the pages just fly by. So you need to write more, please. You have struck a common chord if one judges by the comments left for the last chapter and for this one. Funnyone’s pretty funny “The High-Priced Spread”. I like that. You just have a great way of integrating different storylines from the past and the present. Well done, pancha.
Hmmmm, what is next? You leave us capivated! I’m interested to know what made Bette fall in love the first time around, and what broke her heart…
I’m not a Tom Cruise fan myself. Lets hear from you soon and see who Bette drean girl was at the time. Thanks
Why did you have to stop there? It was just getting gooder – as it was already good, it could only get ‘gooder’!. Thanks!
was a difficult time for Bette cause been under the protection of Melvin was hard and then she wanted to get some experience and wasn’t enough for her. Is a very good think that B&T talk about it, i hope Tina won’t freak out! the next chapter please i want to know the woman that changed Bette’s live! very good very good post
I like where you’re going with this story. I’m really fascinated by Bette’s POV…can’t wait for the next post.
I’m super intrigued with Bette’s history. And yes… I did guess… my mind works in mysterious ways.
Pancha – I am really enjoying your story – Please tell us more about Bette’s first experience with a woman. Thank you so very much for writing! *smiles*
this is so fascinating Pancha – -loving how different the two strands are — brilliant
This is very good…can’t wait for the next post.
This is very interesting and I would love to know who the girl was that changed Bette’s life. Please continue.
Okay I’m really slow. I forgot Meg Ryan was in Top Gun. *dies of shame* This chapter made me think about that time in my life. I remember thinking at first, “OMG I had sex!” or something along those lines, but eventually I felt somewhat dirty even though I loved the guy. Then awhile later I looked back and realized it just wasn’t all it was cracked up to be. Same thing happened the second time (yeah I’m pretty much a big noob when it comes to experience). And now that I have said way too much about myself, on with the story.
i like where this is going…..how did bette become the legend she is today? i hope you post again today
Nice insight into Bette’s past. I like how Bette’s telling of her past is her reminiscing or reliving her memory interspersed with the present day. Can’t wait for the rest of the story. Hmmm, wondering who’s the girl who changed Bette’s life… Please post again soon.
Well, at least Tina gets to look at the Cliffs notes of Bette’s sexual initiation. Still need to be convinced (as I’m sure does Tina) that the courtesan thing is the way to go. I don’t want to argue with you pancha, but I was also thinking of the expensive pros (the high priced spread, so to speak) whose elegantly shod tootsies only touched pavement entering/exiting limos, restaurants, and hotels. Believe me, for the price being exchanged, these girls weren’t ugly.
nice can i be first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! make them longer glad your back
This is very interesting. I’m guessing that Bette was a lesbian courtesan and not went to one. But I don’t understand why Bette can’t or don’t want to tell Tina the whole story, why is she leaving things out??? That’s disrespectful to Tina. Post soon, it’s a great story.
Meg Ryan in the Top Gun yeah like her. Ok this good and let see who is the girl that was changed Bettes life forever. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Ah – let the education of Bette Porter begin – this should be enlightening.
this is gooood! waitin for your next post!