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    Bette and Tina: First Time Part 2

    She decided to get up and go get a water bottle from the kitchen for Tina, because she was doing quite a bit of moaning and screaming just a few minutes before. She walked naked and prayed to god Tina didn’t wake up while she was gone, she opened the fridge and got the water and made sure it was cold enough, and then went back to the room. She placed the bottle on her bed side table and slid back into bed and smiled at the fact Tina wasn’t awake yet, It was absolutely adorable, even though she still was concerned.

    Bette laid there snuggled up against Tina, and by now only 12 minutes have gone by. Bette was reminded of the fact that she was highly aroused. In other words she was fucking soaking.

    ‘Should I take care of myself? No I shouldn’t, but what if Tina doesn’t wake up till morning? Well I’ve waited this long so I can wait till tomorrow morning.’ Bette thought to herself. She checked on Tina once more and tapped her pretty little cheeks gently and decided she probably wasn’t going to wake up till morning. Bette settled down in beside Tina, and right when she decided to close her eyes and try and get some sleep she felt Tina stir, she jumped up so she was looking at Tina’s face, hoping it wasn’t Tina just moving but her waking up.

    “Bette…” Tina said rather quietly.

    “Babe, you okay?” Bette didn’t wait for an answer as she turned and grabbed the water from her bed side table and opened it for Tina.

    “Here, drink some water babe,” Tina gladly accepted and let Bette lift her neck for her and feed her the water slowly. She drank a little more then half the bottle before she pulled her head back slightly, signaling to Bette she had had enough for now.

    “You ok baby?” Bette asked concerned and stroked Tina’s cheek

    “Yeah I’m fine,” Silence then filled the room; Bette knowing something was on her mind

    “I don’t…”

    “What Tee, it’s ok” Bette waited patiently for Tina to continue

    Tina sighed; she didn’t want to look stupid, considering she just fainted. She blushed a little bit,

    Comments

    1. Wonderful story. Very good first attempt, hopefully not the last. I found that both parts were well done. One can never get tired of B&T stories. I look forward to your next story.

    2. Wow Shalla! I can’t say Chapter 1 was better than 2 or vice versa. You are an excellent writer and I’d love to see more stories from you. Thanks!

    3. Excellent. And like Tina I can’t believe this was your first time writing. 5 stars. BTW, NC-17 stories are difficult to write w/o them becoming cheesy. Yours was excellent and realistic.

    4. Don’t be shy and have faith in yourself.This was incredible good.What other said already it’s difficult to write NC17 and you did it very good.I really hope you’ll write more.Thanks

    5. Looks as though you wrote this four years ago in July and I don’t know why I didn’t see it then and read it but at last I’ve read and enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it.

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