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Bette and Tina: First Time Part 2
“I don’t… What just happened?” Tina said softly
“Babe, you just fainted, I mean I tried to wake you up but I thought better to just let you rest, are you ok though? Do you hurt anywhere?”
‘Did I hurt anywhere?’ Tina thought ‘My pussy hurts but so good, and I feel stiff and sore everywhere else’
Tina chuckled lightly and turned her head to the side “No, I mean I know I fainted,” Tina started playing with Bette’s hair “I just meant the other thing… that happened…”
Bette looked down at Tina and smiled the smile of all smiles.
“Babe, I am 100% sure you just had your first orgasm” If Tina wasn’t looking at Bette, she would still be able to hear the smile in Bette’s voice.
“Are you sure? I mean I know you are the experienced one her but, is that what thats suppose to feel like?”
Bette smiled at this. She would have been discouraged if Tina had made little sound during their earlier activities, but since she made a lot of it she knew Tina didn’t mean her orgasm was bad.
The question made Tina ever cuter then she already was. “Yes, that’s what it’s suppose to feel like. But just think, I mean this was our first time, and we have many more times ahead of us, and it will get better and better.” Bette said pecking Tina on the lips.
Tina just laid there under Bette and thought how that could be possible when the one she just had was so amazing and mind blowing. ‘I mean it made me faint!’
“You were so amazing Bette! I didn’t know one person could feel something like that, it was—“Tina was cut off as she choked on her words as tears started to fall from her eyes,
“Aw, babe it’s ok, I love you so much baby” Bette said hugging Tina
“I love you too. I’m sorry; it’s just a little overwhelming”
“Babe never apologize for crying,”
Tina laughed a bit and they laid there hugging while Tina calmed down.
“I still can’t believe I fainted… we never speak of this again.”
Bette let out a roaring laughing at this,
“You’re so crazy,”
“No, you’re just so good”
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(33 votes, average: 4.30 out of 5)
Thank you for the wonderful update. I love your writing :D PPS
awww that was just fantastic! …and hot lol. u have to keep writing more ff, we’ll be waiting ;)
Wonderful story. Very good first attempt, hopefully not the last. I found that both parts were well done. One can never get tired of B&T stories. I look forward to your next story.
loved it… and again you did a great job… please keep writing when ever you can… long or short… we will be here reading… thanks…pps
This freshman try at FF for you was certainly a great one. Talk about setting the bar for yourself! Great job, and a very pleasant read.
Wow, what a powerful union that Bette and Tina have forged together. Hope that you will continue to write.
Wow Shalla! I can’t say Chapter 1 was better than 2 or vice versa. You are an excellent writer and I’d love to see more stories from you. Thanks!
I have to agree, that was very hot! PPS!
Great Post!!!! Both chapter are wonderful!!! Can not wait to read more of stories. Thank you PPMS
Excellent. And like Tina I can’t believe this was your first time writing. 5 stars. BTW, NC-17 stories are difficult to write w/o them becoming cheesy. Yours was excellent and realistic.
This was so good. Thank you excellent writing. Can’t wait to read more your of your stories. Thank you again.
That was absolutely wonderful. PPS
Don’t be shy and have faith in yourself.This was incredible good.What other said already it’s difficult to write NC17 and you did it very good.I really hope you’ll write more.Thanks
Great story!
That was amazing and love it!
Just perfect!
Loved this story.
Deserves five stars.
Looks as though you wrote this four years ago in July and I don’t know why I didn’t see it then and read it but at last I’ve read and enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it.
why was that just so fucking adorable and beautiful but……………funny as hell hahahhahahahahhahahahaa