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Bike Ride, Life Ride – Chapter 10
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Jodie said “Is everything ok, Bette?
Jodie sauntered over to the bed and tried to reach for Bette’s hand.
Bette said “Jodie. Don’t. I can’t. We can’t do this anymore”
Jodie said “Do what Bette? What are we doing? We are together. We are girlfriends and I am visiting you in the hospital after a terrible accident. You are on a lot of medication and your mind is cloudy. Tina is hovering over you day and night. You need some time to yourself Bette; you need some time with me”.
Bette said “Jodie. Listen to me. I don’t want to hurt you more then you have already been hurt. We are not together. We are not girlfriends. Tina is not hovering; I asked … in fact … begged her to stay here with me. I don’t want her to go back to LA. I want her to stay here and take care of me. Jodie it isn’t because I don’t know what I am talking about or the medication or because I have been talked into anything or have been tricked. I understand what is happening right now. Jodie, I deeply regret the way that I have gone about things. I wish I had done things differently, but the truth is that things just happened between Tina and I. Tina and I have a long and complicated history. One that I could not begin to articulate to you. So much was left unsaid and undone between us when we lost our first son and it became more tangled from there. I ran from Tina and from myself and when I cheated on her, so much of our relationship was undefined and left hanging. Jodie I love and admire you, but I was trying on a different persona with you and still running from myself. I am sorry Jodie. I don’t want to hurt you and I don’t want you to dislike me, but I understand if you need to ”.
Jodie said “Bette, we were really getting somewhere and working on things. We could go to therapy and I could take care of you and help you get better”.
Bette said “I don’t want you to Jodie. The truth is that I want Tina here with me. I need her here with me. I don’t think I can make it through this without her here with me”.
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The dialogue between Bette and Jodi was really excellent. Bette’s reaction to her pain and confusion is totally realistic. Well done!
The dialogue between Bette and Jodi was really excellent. Bette’s reaction to her pain and confusion is totally realistic. Well done!
God! I found myself screaming at the screen “Tina, where are you?” ;) I was afraid Jodi has done something stupid..phew! Glad it wasn’t so! Great enotions, very realistic! Keep up the good work. Btw, what does your user name mean?
I meant great emotions *rolleyes*
Bette needs to leave an order with her doctor to restrict Jodie from visiting her. Jodie’s already done enough damage!
i know this is a TiBette story but..I feel so sory for Jodi.Its heartbreaking that all Bette can say is that she needs Tina end of story.I would hate to be Jodi right now.Ok i bet that people are thinking that its all about TiBette but sometimes its the people you hurt that come back to haunt you….just think of that one.
I can see how Jodie would feel right now. I’m glad you allowed Bette to acknowledge how terribly she handled the whole thing with Jodie. She needed to be upfront and honest with her. I don’t think Jodie will shrink away, so Bette needs to restrict her visitation. It was very realistic to see Bette’s emotions all over the place after Jodie left the room. Tina has a very calming effect on her. I can’t wait to see in the next chapter Bette’s waking up to Tina by her side and the talk I’m sure they will have. Please post soon!
You write TiBette so well.
I sure hope Jodi is out of the picture for good. Thank God for Tina..I know she will prove herself to Bette. pps
WOW!!! Feel sorry for Bette. Jodi is such a f**king Bitch. Now when Bette wakes up she tells Tina what Jodi said. I am glad Tina is there for B. Thank you PPS
For all the alpha female that Bette is in her job, she is an absolute marshmallow in her personal life and Jodie uses it against her all the time. Jodie manipulates Bette to unimaginable depths because of her fears and doubts. Jodie should be kicked in the butt for what she is doing to Bette and Tina. You can not be i love with someone and treat them like that and enjoy the feeling as Jodie has. She was smiling the last time she left Bette after telling her that Tina would leave hwe. Jodie cares for no one but herself. Hopefully Jodi will not come back but I actually think she will try to get to Bette again. They mudt put s dtop to her visiting and ban her from the hospital. You are doing a great job with this story. PPS
It’s a very scary, confusing time for Bette…sustaining all those injuries and the recovery period following has your emotions and thoughts all over the place….I know with T’s love and support that she’ll make it through just fine!! Great update, glad Jodi finally got the message…PPS :)
Poor Bette, she is soo insecured and I can enderstand that. Tina is dong and sayng the right things to calmher. Jodie just must disapear of their life and they would be dealing with the Bette illness. Love the story so emotional, thank you. PPVS
hopefuly jodie takes the hint.. and bete has to trust tina… and i think she will when she wakes up and finds that tina is sleeping right next to her.. great chapter.. i hope jodie doesn’t ry any thing on tina.. but shane is there and she will protect tina… PPS
Thanks for the great update. Glad that Bette made things pretty clear with Jodie. Now she can begin the healing process with Tina by her side. Thanks again and pps.
Jodi has to stay away, she only hinder Bette recovery.
What an emotional chapter. Poor Bette, she certainly does have a long road ahead, she’s just lucky to have Tina at her side. I hope Jodie gets the message, but knowing Jodie it’s not going to be that simple.
Thank you for posting this story! I am enjoying it very much!
ohh wow…hope jodi doesn’t take revenge…get bette better plz…love tina…pps
Man, jodi did a head job on Bette. Tina is there for the long haul and jodi could never do what Tina can do for Bette. Tina and Bette are family and will always be a family.
If Tina continue to let Jodie come around ,she is doing Bette more harm than good. If Jodie is stupid enough to tackle Tina sge shpuld get the a%% whipping of her life. Shae will cover Tinas and Bette back, they will need it for Hodie is a back stabber. Love how Tina can calm Bette down with just her loving hands on her. thanks