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    City Of Angels Chapter 7: Good Vs. Evil Part 1

     

    “Camilla!” Dana cried out to her unconscious friend. In a mad frenzy she sprung to her feet and rushed towards the crime lord with all her strength, but fate was not smiling down on her today as Victor quickly turned around and grabbed her by the throat. He raised her above his head as she tried to kick her way out of his grip.

     

    “I guess all good things have to come to an end.” She stared down at him with her blurry eyes vision struggling to breathe. Some how she’s still alive

     

    “You…can’t…kill….me…” Dana whispered out with her last ounce of strength.

     

    “Is that so? Sweetie, with out your powers, you don’t stand a chance. You were always weak Fairbanks. And now…you’re going to fly.”

     

    Victor screamed out as he ran towards one of the windows in his office with Dana still in his grip. Dana desperately tried to break free from his hands but it was no use, her strength was already depleted and she was now vulnerable as any ordinary man.

     

    Camilla came to just in time to see Victor running towards a window with Dana in his hands.

     

    “Dana!” She screamed just as Victor forcefully pushed Dana out the window. The glass shattered as she fell from the broken Window pane.

     

    Camilla rushed towards the window that Dana was pushed out of. She saw her friend looking up at her as she was falling from the large toward.

     

    Dana’s body pummel towards the street below at full speed. She crashed onto one of the large Day of the dead floats below and landed with a sickening thud.

     

    The young artist sobbed loudly as she saw the tennis player below lay motionlessly.

     

    Camilla sank to her knees sobbing loudly as Victor let out a victorious loud laugh that shook throughout his office.

     

    “Good bye miss Fairbanks! So sorry you had to go.”

     

    He walked over to the sobbing girl who looked up at him with loathing hostility in her eyes. Her tears continue to pour down her face as she glared at the smiling drug dealer.

     

    “You monster…” She whispered out through her sobbing voice. Victor just smiled at his prey and violently picked her up by her wrists.

     

    “Monster? You have no idea what kind of monster I can be.” He snarled out as he dragged her to his desk. She tried to break free from the psychotic man but she couldn’t compete with his strength.

     

    He walked over to the table where the still bleeding bird was lying and picked up the dying bird with one hand.

     

    “Let’s see what kind of monster I will become after I take your friend’s power.” He squeezed the bird in his hand violently as it flapped its broken wings, trying to break free from Victor’s grasp. As the blood poured out of its body; Victor placed his mouth underneath the bleeding bird drinking its blood.

     

    Camilla once again tried to escape from his grip but with each gulp he took of the bird’s blood, the stronger he got. As soon as he depleted the crow of its blood he threw the bird aside and turned his attention towards the freighted girl. She looked in horror as she saw her friend’s power now coursing its way through the kingpin’s body. He looked down at her with his pupils as black as coal.

     

    “Now you’re going to see a real monster.” Victor growled out in a low and dark voice.

     

    AN: I know this chapter was short, but it’s short for a reason. I have an idea for an ending to this story yet I wasn’t sure if I should write A Sad ending or a happy ending. I’m thinking of doing both but like I said. Not really sure, this is more of a filler chapter than anything else.

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    1. filler.. this was filler? this was fantastic all tho made me want to cry! but i know victor will get his! and as for the ending. it’ll be sad regardless cuz like Adelfiz said Dana and Alice are still dead but if Dana gets her full revenge ie: ending Victors life or making him pay (showing him what they went through when they died) perhaps but yeah either way i know its gonna be kick ass so plz post sooon! :)

    2. this is crazy and sad at the same time!! I can’t believe that this happened, but hopefully, Dana will come back and kill Victor for what he has done!! I can’t wait to see what happens next!! and thanks for enjoying my first story Damaged!! I’m glad that you enjoyed it!! i miss it though!

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