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Coming Back – Chapter 3
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Previously
Jenny : (whispering) I forgave you a long time ago.
Marina, listening to her heart, crying, takes Jenny in her arms and kiss her. And Jenny kisses Marina too.
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Story 1
THE PLANET – NOON
After a beautiful passionate kiss, they stare at each other, in silence just admiring each others beauty. Then they hug, words cant tell how they feel, this found love that they had lost. If they were able theyd stay like that for the rest of their lives. Marina passed her hand in Jennys hair, look at her, we can see and feel the love in her eyes.
Marina : I love you.
Jenny : I love you too.
They sit at the table. The waiter come to take Jennys order, but Jenny cant turn her sight from Marinas eyes.
Waiter : Hi! Can I serve you something ?
Jenny : (looking at Marina) Ill take an ice tea.
Waiter : Thank you
The waiter leave.
Marina : Im sorry, I havent give news.
Jenny : Its okay.
Marina : I was about to, but I was thinking that you were upset.
Jenny : At the beginning I was, but I was wondering where you were, how you were
Marina : I was good, well in a way, but I missed you so much.
Jenny : I missed you too.
(silence)
Marina : Youve talk about experiences what happened when I was gone ?
Jenny : (looking at the table) Too many things.
Marina : Would you please tell me ?
Jenny : Well a guy named Marc, came at the house an stayed with me and Shane for a couple of months. During those months hed place some cameras and filmed us for a study or something. I met a couple of persons, one of those were Carmen, whos now with Shane. And I kinda freak out but now Im better.
Marina : Wow! Thats a lot of things.
Jenny : And you, what have you done ?
Marina : I got back in my country for a while after triying to commit suicide There Ive met a couple of women, but nothing that keep me interested, then I came back here.
Jenny : When did you come back ?
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It’s so nice to have you back. As for choosing which story you should continue with, I choose # 1. I like the direction that this story seems to be heading. As for story no.2, it’s only natural that Jenny would have feelings of doubt about Marina’s love and motives towards her,in time I believe that both Marina and Jenny will have to prove that their love is true and pure for each other.CC, I admire how you tell love story of Marina and Jenny,it’s so sweet yet so real…Please keep going with story #1..I look forward to you posting again soon and have Happy Independence Day!!
As long as our girls end up together I’m always up for a kittle drama. I loved both of them my dear.
I second Lenab! But maybe a little angst and panic in Jenny would make it interesting…as long as they get back together in the end I’m all for it!!
Great story!! Can’t you continue them both like you did now? Please write Shane/Carmen ., I like the way you write the:)
Story #1 is better for me. I’m afraid that Story #2 will not allow Jenny and Marina to be together which is very important to me.
Continue Shane+Carmen:)Why can’t you do both , you write them well both!