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Coming Back – chapter 4
Previously
Marina : Hi, Im Marina.
Carmen : Nice to meet you.
Marina : Pleasures mine.
Carmen : So youre Jennys new girlfriend ?
Marina smiles
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JENNYS HOUSE – LATE AFTERNOON
Jenny and Shane look at each other, uncomfortable cause of what Carmen just said.
Marina : I was also her first one.
Carmen just doesnt understand.
Shane : Hum.. yes Carmen, you know the girl that owned the Planet before Kit.
Carmen : Dont know.
Jenny looks very uncomfortable, sits at the table.
Jenny : Baby, (trying to change subject) what have you prepared for diner ?
Marina : (surprised) um.. “filet de porc frais aux pommes, sur lit doignons”(french)
Jenny : Cool, I dont know what it is, but it looks good (with an fake smile).
Marina : I hope its gonna be.
Shane (to Carmen) : Well talk about that later
Carmen : Why ? I wanna know.
Shane (between her teeth) : Later, please.
Carmen (upset) : Mmm.. kay.
Marina grabs a bottle of white wine and sits at the table. A few moments later, Carmen and Shane sit at the table too. They all look a bit stressed but this feeling disappears. Then Carmen broke the silence.
Carmen : Marina, this is delicious.
Marina : Thanks.
Jenny and Shane : Yeah !
Jenny : Its awesome.
Marina smiles.
Carmen : So how you guys met ?
Shane gives Carmen a dark look, because only her knows the secret. Jenny, again, is uncomfortable.
Jenny : Its a very very long story.
Carmen : Good, we have wine and oh.. (looking outside) its starting to rain outside so..
(silence)
Marina : Well, it was, baby, tell me if Im wrong (looking at Jenny), at one of Bette and Tinas parties.
Jenny : Thats right.
Carmen : So
Marina : Well , at this point, Jenny was with Tim and she was moving in with him. Bette invited them at the party, so they came.
Marina smiles at Jenny.
Marina : So, I was walking in the house when I saw her, she was very shy. Then I went to talk with her but she was already talking with Alice,.. I think whatever Later that night, she went at the bathroom then I follow her inside and I kissed her.
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(29 votes, average: 3.48 out of 5)
I love Marina. :( I love reading about her. Please keep it going!! :)
Love it. These are the two best couples ever.
good keep it coming
I agree with Scurry, these are the two best and the sweetest couples ever. I love it as well, we’ll see you back here soon, Okay!
Love the interaction between the couples. Can’t wait to see more of this lovely story.
I love the story… but I wanted to know… are you french? (par pur hasard…)
Et oui! Waikiki tu as raison je parle français… ou si tu veux Québecois!! :P