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    Destiny in a Mechanics shop (Pt 22)

    Story written on March 12, 2005 by Imlovinit.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=52557
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    Break in

    “I’m one lucky woman.” Bette whispered to no one in particular as she started to slide onto the bed as cautiously as possible, hoping not to wake Tina. Looking over at the side table seeing the bright red numbers showing that it was five past six Bette smiled to herself. This is where she wanted to be and whom she wanted to be with. Bette pulled her white wife beater top over her head and threw it next to her shoes. Sliding under the covers, Bette cuddled up behind Tina, putting a protective arm around her waist. Kissing her neck gently, Tina stirred a little moaning. “Oh Bette.”

    Suddenly Tina eyes shot open and she sat up looking beside her, seeing a dark shadow of someone else.

    “AAAHHHHHHHH.” Tina screamed as she started to hit the unknown suspect with a pillow. Bette couldn’t help but laugh. Finally capturing the pillow and pulling it out of Tina’s grasp, pulling her down and bringing her lips to Tina’s… Passionately kissing Tina until she calmed down. Tina caressed Bette’s face and hair, letting her tongue probe the object in front of her…Tina moaned loudly as she felt the other mouth open for her to explore further. Letting her hands explore further down the body…Finding nothing but smooth skin and a silk padded bra, Tina was on fire, curiously letting her mouth lick and suck down there neck. “Oh Tina.” Bette moaned as she pulled Tina’s mouth back to hers. Tina rolled on top of Bette wearing nothing but a pair of boxers. Bette’s hands scowled Tinas back, wanting to touch every scearic piece of warm skin, finally letting her hands rest on the middle of Tina’s back. Tina pulled her lips away, her hand still on Bette’s cheek, looking closely at Bette, Tina let her thumb glide over Bette’s chin bone, before she stopped and then slapped Bette hard across her face.

    “That’s for scarring the ***** out of me!” Tina then threw a pillow close to the door.
    “What are you doing that for?” Bette asked confused, whilst Tina turned slid off of Bette and turned over away from her.
    “Your sleeping out on the couch” Tina said sternly.
    “Wha…why?”
    “For your little stunt then Bette…You scared the ***** out of me…. Now just ***** off.”
    Bette slid out of the sheets and stumbled over to the door. Turning back to look at Tina, finding a response but opted to let the situation go…Turning back around, Bette picked up the pillow and walked out towards the lounge room and Tina’s couch.

    Chucking the pillow on the couch, Bette got comfortable once more, peaking to see that the time was 6:30, Bette tried to relax, closing her eyes and thinking about the things she loved most.

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    2. Oh, WOW! What can I say to discribe this story so far? Well, I stayed up all night reading the first chapter to now, and now I’m up and the first thing I do is come on the computer to leave a comment (since I was really tired after finishing playing catch up with your story). I’m really glad I stumble on this story, it is shall I say…MUY CALIENTE!

      I have two chapters that I would like to comment on. First one, chapter 13,…OH MY GOD…I think I may be alone in this situation, but I would prefer that type of scene of images filling my head, than a “sex scene”….

      … That’s why I loved it, I love how Bette followed Tina in the bathroom trying to talk to her. Then, Bette again, followed Tina outside the club trying to explain, but Tina wouldn’t listen. I think the reason I LOVE this chapter so much is because of Bette’s persistant and determination to talk to her woman….

      …. Then Bette did what I have always LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE seeing or reading, whether it’s a movie, tv shows, or readings….

      …. As Tina was about to walk away, She grab Tina by her waist, and spunned her around in her arms and proceed to kissed her. ( OH MY GOD, I would surrender myself helplessly if that ever happen , but there’s no drama in my life for that kind of thing to happen to me, or maybe I could just…umm, never mind, I’m going off track)….

      …Okay, back to what I way saying, the second chapter that I love is obviously this last one, chapter 22. I love the playfulness of it, and I love it when you wrote, ” Tina let her thumb glide over Bette’s chin bone, before she stopped and then slapped Bette hard across her face” . My first initial reaction was, ‘how sexy is that, Tina getting rough with Bette’, and then, ‘oh my, they have to get it on now, cause this is way too hot to not to’. Then Tina just told Bette to sleep on the couch because Bette been a bad girl. I love that!! I LOVE this chapter, one: because Tina didn’t even question Bette on how she got in her house, and two: Tina didn’t seem to be phase by the fact that Bette jumped into bed with her and starts spooning her. Oh, love this Tina….

      So, I should THANK YOU for making Tina’s character more confident, and stronger, so now, I could really see her as an equal to Bette. Because some of the other fan fictions, as great as they are, I would always have one problem with it, I’d never take Tina to be an equal in Bette’s presence. Bette somehow, someway always seem to be…I don’t know…superior? So, it’s nice to see this side of Tina.

      Alright, I just realized that I wrote a freakin novel, instead of a couple of sentences of comments. So I think I should stop. Before I go, I would like to say that this is one of the best story on this site, and I just wished that I found this early. So, do your things and lift that pretty fingers of yours and start typing! (*Not a command, just saying it in excitment*)

      OKAY, I just read what I just wrote, I don’t really get what I just wrote, and (silly me) I’m going to assumed that you would be able to understand it…SO, If you don’t get it either, just know that I have love this story, and hope you post the next chapter soon.

    8. ok, rule number one… don’t pick the lock of your girl’s place and sneak into bed with her… it always turns out badly. lol. great chapter! post soon!

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