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Discovering Aphrodite
Discovering Aphrodite
“Romance? Holiday?” Bette repeated, completely taken aback by the boldness of Tina’s question and also the sheer unabashed way in which she had asked the question.
“Actually…, holiday romance, rather than romance holiday…” Tina said in reply as she smiled at the dumbfounded Bette standing next to her and looking around in an also agitated way.
“Uh…, yes…, no…., uh…, what did you say?” Bette said, thrown into complete state of being flustered with such an out of the blue and bold question.
Tina smiled, could this woman get any more adorable than she did at that moment? She wouldn’t have thought she would of had those reactions in her wildest imagination. She had seemed so confident and composed, but maybe she had been caught off guard.
Tina took a deep breath, easing her own beating chest, she gave a slight laugh, unsure whether her question was intended in the way it was being taken, “just a question…, have you ever had a holiday romance…”
“So you uh…,” Bette said, her mouth drying as she tried to formulate her words, “you uh…?”
Tina looked deeply into Bette’s eyes, “just a question…”
“Oh…, um…, I uh had one when I was on a trip in college…” Bette said, slightly perturbed that she had been completely caught off guard. “I was about eighteen I guess, a trip to Italy and she was called…” Bette smiled as she remembered the moment, “she was called Adriana…, she was beautiful…”
Tina smiled in reply, “sounds like good memories…”
“Yeah I guess they are, I haven’t thought about her in a long time…” Bette said as she glanced back out to the near setting sun. “It’s a gorgeous sunset tonight…,” she said, changing the subject.
Tina stood beside Bette, standing closer than she had been. She slipped her arm through Bette’s as she quietly replied, “it certainly is…”
“You wanna walk along the front?” Bette asked.
“Sure…” Tina said as they turned from the sunless sky, “isn’t strange how quickly the sun disappears as soon as it hits the water…”
Bette turned suddenly and gave a wide smile, “you know I thought I was the only person to think that…”
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Hey….well i have to agree with Tina here..Bette could not be more adorable than she is in this story..and tho Bette didnt hear Tina as she left her..i kinda have a feeling the wait will be worth it..Great update to a really lovely story that you can “see” unfolding :)
I am not into torture, but that is what you are doing to me ,JO. Tina needed to speak up louder. Bette was in her own thoughts and didn’t hear Tina. Aphrodite will definitely show up tomorrow for them. I expect one HOT night when they do get together. Great update. Please post soon.
Great story, looking forward to more.
I adore the romance here. Thanks for sharing your talents.
Tina didn’t have any problem speaking up earlier and I bet she won’t have that problem later. But why the cat got her tongue just then beats me.
Nice story, Jo. Always enjoy your writing.
I think they will be discovering more than Aphrodite tomorrow! PPS:)
Romantic and tender but I’m shallow. Let’s get to the NC-17. ;-)
Your writing exudes sensuality. Just beautiful!
Hey Jo can we get a chapter a day?I am enjoying this story.I prefer the build up.
What a touching chapter…love the interaction between these two. Bravo Jo!
Hello there, dear sweet Jo! This update was a complete delight to read. Bette’s candor is adorable indeed and Tina’s subtle romantic advances are enchanting. You made us give a big sigh at the end of this chapter. Thanks for bringing us this beautiful and amazing story, dear friend. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lu & Marsh (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
Beautiful, sweet, romantic chapter. I can hardly wait to the next…
This is such a great story. Can’t wait to see what happens. Thank you for this :)
This is such a great story. Can’t wait to see what happens. Thank you for this :)
nice, really nice…maybe Tina should go after Bette…nice to see Tina being more confident one :)
Thank you, Jo for that great update.Very romantic. PPS
Wow wow wow!!! Just joining in, what a great original fic!! I Love it!!! So romantic!! I’ve always wanted a holiday romance… or should I say a romance that starts on a holiday! PPVVS!
adorable Bette, bold Tina. I can see it all, perfect. Thk u.
Well Tina if you said a little louder you wouldn’t be walking back now, would you, lol. They are cute and the kiss is sweet, love them. Please post more, thanks!
This is a sweet story. Maybe next time I’m on vacation something like this can happen to me. Well here’s hoping. Thanks for posting!
nice chapter! Looking forward to the aphrodite;P
So good… The setting, the growing attraction, the pace… everything is spot on. Thanks Jo!
Oh my goodness, you did not just leave us there?? I can’t wait to see where this goes from here. I’ll be waiting. :) PPS
Romance? Holiday? So cute! I can’t wait for the next one. Thanks for the great update…
Jo this is a wonderful story and the way you are unfolding it slowlymakes it all the more enticing. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Whoa…well I’m certain that everyone could feel Bette and Tina’s growing lust in that chapter! Unbelievable writing Jo.
wonderful update. i am completely enthralled!
aww so romantic…this story..thanks
Jo, This story is just Amazing!!! I so love how romantic it is. Thank you PPVS