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Don’t Give Up #08
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The day seemed to prolong more than usual no amount of work that I seemed to get through made the time pass by any quicker. What did she want to talk about? Stupid question Porter obviously the child she’s carrying, whether she even see’s this as your child anymore.
Under different circumstances this would have been my child, and we would be celebrating the new little person who will take over our world. But reality strikes you harder than you think, and now I’m sitting at the receiving end of what ever Tina has decided to do. And I know no matter how much I beg and plead with her, in the end she will do what she feels is right for her.
I don’t want to be without her; in some idiotical way I think I’m going through all of this as one gigantic test to prove I am worthy for Tina. Some times we forget how important our partners are; and this is a question of whether we are truly meant to be.
I arrived at 5.50 I thought better early than late, as this was important step for both of us. This would be the second time I would see the love of my life, the one who stole my heart and took my breathe away. I will never forget that.
I tapped the main grand doors, Helena was never one to do anything by half’s. Her estate in itself had me in awe, although I was content with mine and Tina’s house. It was like an over extravagant beach house, with loads of land surrounding it that backed on to the beach. Would Tina like a house like this?
I hadn’t noticed Tina had opened the door already, lost in my own thoughts that was a usual occurrence these days. She stood by the door, I couldn’t seem to read her mood.
"Hi Tina" my tone surprised even me, it was excitable at the sight of her. Her bump seemed to have grown. I knew it sounded ridiculous, even in my own thoughts as I had seen her only 3 days previous.
"Hi Bette, come in you’re abit early. But I guess that’s a good thing." My heart rate quickened at just the slight indication I could do something to please her.
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Bette and Tina’s reasons for wanting a child was because they thought it would fix their relationship when it was just struggling and maybe they had a chance (although small) with the first pregnancy. However this second pregnancy was even more ill-concieved because it sounds like Tina was mainly acting as a surrogate for Bette’s baby and has little connection to it for herself otherwise it would never enter their minds that Tina’s decision to abort had anything to do with Bette’s infidelity or the fact that they are no longer together. Tina needs to stop thinking of this child as a commodity or something they can just dispose of because it comes at an inconvinient time or no longer suits their purpose.
This is Tinas baby,she had to make the decision.PPS
I hoped the appointment is for an ultrasound scan instead of an abortion. Thanks for this update and I am anxious to see more.
First, congratulations and I wish you all the best. Second, if the appointment is for an abortion, Tina’s really just trying to stick it to Bette even more than I thought. Tina has a right to decide what she wants to do but to tell Bette about the baby and then ask her to be there for the abortion is horrible. See how angry you just made me, lol. Nice chapter. Can’t wait for #9.
Great update. Personally with the last statement Tina made, “I hope you mean that….” That says to me that Tina wants her there for an ultrasound to see how Bette acts towards her and the baby. Tina doesn’t really want an abortion, at the moment she is not sure of Bette’s feelings because she herself does not want to be without Bette in her life and Bette wants and needs her as well. I think after Bette’s declaration Tina is having second thoughts of having the abortion. At least that is how I am reading those last few lines of the story. Hope I’m right. These last couple chapters have been very thought provoking and gives us a lot to think about. Abortion is sometimes not a good thing and I think it is not good for this couple, Tina could, if she truly does not want the child, carry her and give up the child to Bette for adoption. Don’t think Tina would ever think of this but she should give it a thought and maybe that could be why she wants Bette at the appointment on Tuesday. Tina will always be sorry she has given up the child or aborted it. She will never be free of the guilt especially if Bette rears the child alone. I believe that Bette would never have another person in her life as long as she has her child with her. Hoping for Tina to come back to them. Can hardly wait to see what happens next. Thanks for posting.
No! No! Please fix this. Please let them work it out…it’s just so damn sad. Thank you for this story and congrats!
wonder is that an regular or ‘that’ kind of appointment…hmm…love this story! heartbraking!
Nooooooooooooo! Tina don’t do it please!!!! I hurt my knee running this morning but it is nothing compared to that! Fix it…….I mean it! :0)
Oh please, please let Tina change her mind. I really hope she doesn’t go thru with it. It think it would actually kill Bette. Bette has to make Tina see that they could make this work. She better bust her ass to change Tina’s mind and show her that she not only loves her and this child, but they could make things right between them once again. If Tina really doesn’t want the child couldn’t she just have it and give it to Bette? just a thought….I’m so depressed now. You are a very good writer and I’ll stick with this story no matter Tina’s decision. PPS
Ah….i somehow don’t think Bette is going to show up and comfort Tina whe she aborts their child. This is DRA-MA! Maybe Bette can convince Tina to change her mind; if not i don’t think Bette will ever be able to forgive Tina deep down in her soul (no matter what her mind says). Great post!
Depressing, but wonderfully written! PPS
i personally dont agree with Tina having the abortion but i gotta give it to you its kinda hard for a kid to be born into a relationship where in this case mommy and mommy aren’t getting along. i just hope everything works out for Bette and Tina.
If you let Tina abort the baby I’m going to ignore this story… seriously… TINA KEEP THE BABY!!!!!!!!!!
i forgot PPS
now the way i read those last few sentences.. tina wants bette to go to the doc’s appointment.. not to abort… by her saying “I hope you mean that”… i also believe deep down tina wants this baby more then ever… she just wants to make sure bette also wants this baby… great chapter… pps