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    Double Vision 10

    Story written on November 23, 2006 by vvitch.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=63315
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    Kiss

     

    “No!” scowled Alice “What the fuck was that? I can muster up more oomph while kissing Jenny for god’s sake! Are you telling me you two, YOU two, the hottest sexiest fucking alphas can’t kiss better than that?! Jeez-usss!” Something’s up, something’s definitely up. “Do it again!”

     

    “Oh for…” quickly swallowing the rest, Estelle moved the still-mute Bette to the side and leaned in, her hair blocking Alice’s view.

     

    “What… the hell you doing?!” muttered Bette

     

    “Shut up! I’m trying to help you! She can’t see our lips…”

     

    “Everything alright in there?” Alice yelled, trying not to laugh. “Show me some lurrve”

     

    “Hrrmph” grumbled Estelle as she woodenly slid her hand up Bette’s thigh.

     

    “Jesus. Have you done this before?” complained Bette, under hear breath.

     

    Alice snickered “Less talkie, more…” and stopped suddenly.

     

    Having had enough Bette to last her a lifetime, Estelle dropped her hands and they both turned to Alice to see if that had been enough to convince her. “Now are you happy?”

     

    Standing stock still, Alice replied “Yeah, I’m happy. But I don’t think ‘happy’ is the word for that Helena standing by the door”

     

    ~~~

     

    (same place, ten minutes later)

     

    “You kissed her! YOU kissed her! You KISSED her! You kissed HER!” sputtered Helena waving her arms around, nearly missing Estelle’s shoulders, then her head.

     

    Bette marvelled at how calm Estelle seemed, despite the flailing arms in her face. It’s as if they take turns. When Estelle is upset, Helena is calm. When Helena is upset, Estelle is calm.

     

    “Dearest” spoke Estelle, finally responding but not yet moving. “You’re wearing yourself out over nothing”

     

    “Nothing?! Nothing?! You k…”

     

    “All those variations of ‘you kissed her’ are surely not helping your voice and certainly not my ear…”

     

    “It’s not funny, Estelle” Helena’s voice suddenly grew quiet and her eyes shimmered with tears only Estelle saw.

     

    Moving swiftly, Estelle wrapped her arms around her sister “Dear” she cooed softly and just held her sister quietly.

     

    ~

    (stage left, same time)

     

    “What the hell is…” whispered Alice hoarsely to Bette.

     

    “Shhh!” interrupted Bette, as she kept her eyes fixed on the sisters a few feet away.

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    4. I so much love this, vicky, I sooo much love this!!!You have this unbelievable lovable way of mixing up comedy and romance, I sooo much love it (I know I already said it but it really is!)When I saw only two short pages, I thought I would have to protest (kidding, of course) but at the end I was simply too much in love with this all to say anything else than : I sooo much love this fiction and how you write and in fact I think I love you :OOOO LOL

    5. Oh, my ! I can’t believe you did it ! I can’t believe you stopped there ! Threachery !!!! LOL ! Well, this is a perfectly fine chapter, Lady V. Did I mention before that I loved the interaction between Bette and Alice ? Well, I do. I truly love their complicity and they totally crack me up. Furthermore, that mischievous and roguish side of Alice is so funny !… Yet, are you sure “hmmed” is a word ? You know, I couldn’t find that one in my dictionnary. LOL !All right, on a more serious note, now I think I’d like to see Helena make her real entrance on the stage as she’s been a little too absent in this chapter. I know it’s for the sake of drama, Vvith, but we’ve been missing her… Anyway, I’m soooooo looking forward to reading your next installment ! In fact, is there a way to bribe you so that you can post a new chappie like… Tomorrow ? LOL ! ( whispering : just let us know, Vvitch…). Thanks for sharing your tremendous talent as an autor with us.

    7. and how to forget the best funniest line in years? “The hell does that mean? What pff? Why’re you pff-ing at me? I don’t even know what pff means!” ahahahahhahahahah!!!! you really have talent, girl!

    8. You know? You know… HAHAHAHA, your fanfic was amazing! :D Hilariously funny! I liked the part when you made every thing so crazy, and have Helena walking through the door. Godwin man… AND, you’re right about me losing another bet. I did lose. How did you guess? GREAT JOB V! YOU’RE THE BEST! I LOVE THIS STORY (AND YOUR OTHER INSANE MIND-READING ONE) SOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSO MUCH!

    9. This is absolutely awesome! Everytime you write a new chapter, you surpass your last! This was so romantic, funny, everything! I love ALLL your stories SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO much tooooooo!!!!! I really hope you post us another soon :)

    14. Hey vvitchy glad to see you found the time to update this one as well cuz it really is my favorite story. I couldn’t stop laughing at the part wxhere the real helena went bezerk after seeing her evil twin kiss Bette. And Bette’s face at the idea of kissing the wrong twin I could so see it in my imagination. Your writing style is so wonderful sweetie, please keep up the good work and update sooner if you can. Huggies BeL’s

    16. Excellent! I love how Alice was shut up with Bette’s comment…although…you need to get some Tina Jealously in there…she could have walked in and seen Estelle and Bette “lip locking”good job now do more…hehehe

    17. Vvvvvvvvvvv! Please forgive me for arriving late. Well let me say that I absolutely love it and of course, the day that you posted it! Thank you for the well wishes *big toothy smile* Your stories are a treat and always make me smile…warm my heart and very often, LOL. Estelle playing dead by filing her nails…B being her cocky self….Al, of course nosey as heck…the appearance of the other Helena…a little twin war…and a Belena kiss to close. Soooo V, where are we going from here? PPPS

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