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First, Last, & Forever? (Version 2.0 – Chapter 15.5 – PREVIOUSLY UNPOSTED CHAPTER)
CHAPTER 15.5
Bette stared into the space of the open doorway that had just been vacated by a certain beautiful blonde, her mouth slightly agape as she lingered on the thought of Tina in the shower, waiting for her.
“Bette.” The sound prompted Bette to blink her eyes a couple of times, but she was still lost in thought. “BETTE!”
Her reverie was broken by the sound of a familiar voice calling to her from what sounded like very far away. Bette finally tore her eyes away from the doorway and looked down at the phone in her left hand, which she now lifted to her ear.
“Uh, hey, Kit. Umm.” Bette stumbled, still quite distracted. “Uhh…”
“Baby sis, what on earth is going on with you?” Kit laughed heartily, fairly certain she knew exactly what was going on. She hadn’t been able to hear Tina all that clearly after she’d passed the phone to Bette, but was pretty sure she’d heard the word ‘shower’ not long before she’d been met with silence.
“Um, nothing, Kit.” Bette did a bad job fibbing to her sister. “How’s Angelica?” She elected to change the subject rather than submit to an interrogation.
“She is absolutely wonderful.” Kit confirmed for the second time in five minutes. She thought briefly about teasing her sister about her distracted state, but decided to file away that information for later use. “I think she misses her mommies a little bit, but we are having a great time together.”
“We miss her, too.” Bette sighed, still trying to mentally adjust to all the ways her life had changed in the three months since Angelica was born. Years earlier, when they’d spent weekends together, they’d had the luxury of focusing only on one another but for the occasional intrusion from Alice. Now, while they managed to keep their attention mostly focused on one another, Bette knew they both had thoughts of their daughter near the front of their mind much of the time.
“So, you’re sure you’re okay keeping her another night?” Bette asked, her eyes now drifting back in the direction of the bathroom as she heard the firm ‘click’ of the shower door, followed by the sweet sound of running water.
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(3 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
Um….were you trying to tell us that you might have been a little rusty writing sex? Cause….um….** THUD ** I don’t think so. That was smoking hot!!!! Thanks Steph, it was fabulous.
Well I just have to say that this chapter was far from awful. It was extremely hot. Great writing.
Yah Steph your right, that was “BAD”!!!! LIKE NAUGHTY.. Now back to business, where is 17 reasons???? hmmmmmm
I’m glad you put this in there.. I think its important for the relationship to show that they are still capable of being mad passionate for as long as they are alone.
what the F%^&& are you trying to tell us that you where a little rusty writing sex scenes who are you kidding woman …. that was smoking hot… great job
i think Leslie is really good at helping LOL this was unexpected ;)
KFC……….KFC……FLG……FLG…
You must of have knocked off the rust that you thought was there because I did not get that rusty feeling at all. In fact it got a little hot and a cold shower is in order for the night.
Steph, if this is your idea of an awful NC-17 could you please write a really, horrible NC-17 as a follow up? LOL! Very sexy. PS
You better get this through your head Steph you are one of the great NC17 writers.I wish I could do it the way you and some of the others here do.It was hot.
Steph honey, you did a great job with this chapter and you are not rusty at all. Hot!!!! PPS
nice addition. thanks.
There was nothing AND I MEAN nothing awful about this NC-17! By all means please keep writing these “awful” chapters.
:thud: No evidence of rust anywhere in this chapter!
I am so glad U added THAT chapter, hot loving, funny stuff (the Kit-Bette interaction)… great writing…more plz
and u r telling us there’s going to be no sex in the next chapter? girl don’t waste the warm water and a moonlight night on anything else but love!!!! write it NOW.
well aren’t they just clever gals!!! Loving it, I so need more…
Damn that was so freaking hot and love it!
Steph, Steph, Steph… oh my! Are you trying to become the Queen of NC17? My god woman and you think you’re awful at this? Off to take a cold shower I go… ;)
“Rusty”??? I don’t think so, girlie!!! That was HOT!!!
Excellent as always… no sign of rustiness here ,lol
All who are in favor for more NC17 by you, please raise your hands…..’raising both my hands and telling my mom to raise hers to, although doesn’t have a clue why!!
WOW…WOW… Want can I say – HOT. PPS
nice…u make sure those babies and mommy come thru safely. loving this, more soon i hope.
For someone who doesn’t like writing NC17, this was so fucking hot!! Please post soon.