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First, Last, & Forever? (Version 2.0 – Chapter 15.5 – PREVIOUSLY UNPOSTED CHAPTER)
“Oh, of course!” Kit’s smile was evident even through the phone. “I am loving my time with this little angel. Besides, it sounds like you and Tina wouldn’t mind a little extra time to yourselves.” Kit couldn’t resist ribbing her sister just a little.
“Speaking of which, I hear you’ve been conspiring with my wife.” Bette feigned a scowl. “We will be discussing that later.”
“Yeah, yeah, Baby Sis.” Kit laughed again. “You just go enjoy your weekend. I’ll talk to you tomorrow.”
“Thanks, Kit. For everything.” Bette prepared to end the call. “Bye.” Bette pushed the ‘off’ button without waiting for Kit’s response, tossing the phone onto the now-empty bed as she strode towards the bathroom.
Bette paused for a moment, resting a hand against the cool porcelain sink as she watched Tina’s silhouette through the frosted glass. Bette’s chosen angle allowed her to take in the graceful form of Tina arching her back as she rinsed her hair beneath the spray of hot water. Bette’s breath hitched as her eyes wandered over the shape of Tina’s breasts, accentuated by the fact that Tina had her arms raised so that her fingers could work through her golden tresses. As she watched Tina turn and reach for the shower gel, Bette pushed off of the sink and closed the distance between herself and the love of her life.
“What took you so long?” Tina teased as she heard the shower door open. She righted the bottle of vanilla-scented liquid, replacing it on the shelf as she listened for the decisive click of Bette closing the door. She felt Bette’s eyes on her as she turned back and began to slide the loofa sponge over her collarbone, dipping down to the top of her breasts, then across to the other shoulder. She grinned slyly, noting that Bette was watching every move of the sponge over her skin.
Bette unconsciously licked her lips as she slowly surveyed Tina’s smooth skin, pink from the heat of the water pounding against her. She swore she felt her heart beating faster as she watched the thin streams of water cascading down her body, intermingling with the shimmer of tiny bubbles left behind by the shower-gel slicked loofa sponge. She finally managed to take a step towards her wife, bringing her firmly within Tina’s personal space.
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(3 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
Um….were you trying to tell us that you might have been a little rusty writing sex? Cause….um….** THUD ** I don’t think so. That was smoking hot!!!! Thanks Steph, it was fabulous.
Well I just have to say that this chapter was far from awful. It was extremely hot. Great writing.
Yah Steph your right, that was “BAD”!!!! LIKE NAUGHTY.. Now back to business, where is 17 reasons???? hmmmmmm
I’m glad you put this in there.. I think its important for the relationship to show that they are still capable of being mad passionate for as long as they are alone.
what the F%^&& are you trying to tell us that you where a little rusty writing sex scenes who are you kidding woman …. that was smoking hot… great job
i think Leslie is really good at helping LOL this was unexpected ;)
KFC……….KFC……FLG……FLG…
You must of have knocked off the rust that you thought was there because I did not get that rusty feeling at all. In fact it got a little hot and a cold shower is in order for the night.
Steph, if this is your idea of an awful NC-17 could you please write a really, horrible NC-17 as a follow up? LOL! Very sexy. PS
You better get this through your head Steph you are one of the great NC17 writers.I wish I could do it the way you and some of the others here do.It was hot.
Steph honey, you did a great job with this chapter and you are not rusty at all. Hot!!!! PPS
nice addition. thanks.
There was nothing AND I MEAN nothing awful about this NC-17! By all means please keep writing these “awful” chapters.
:thud: No evidence of rust anywhere in this chapter!
I am so glad U added THAT chapter, hot loving, funny stuff (the Kit-Bette interaction)… great writing…more plz
and u r telling us there’s going to be no sex in the next chapter? girl don’t waste the warm water and a moonlight night on anything else but love!!!! write it NOW.
well aren’t they just clever gals!!! Loving it, I so need more…
Damn that was so freaking hot and love it!
Steph, Steph, Steph… oh my! Are you trying to become the Queen of NC17? My god woman and you think you’re awful at this? Off to take a cold shower I go… ;)
“Rusty”??? I don’t think so, girlie!!! That was HOT!!!
Excellent as always… no sign of rustiness here ,lol
All who are in favor for more NC17 by you, please raise your hands…..’raising both my hands and telling my mom to raise hers to, although doesn’t have a clue why!!
WOW…WOW… Want can I say – HOT. PPS
nice…u make sure those babies and mommy come thru safely. loving this, more soon i hope.
For someone who doesn’t like writing NC17, this was so fucking hot!! Please post soon.