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FORCE of NATURE
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FORCE of NATURE
Chapter 11
Stimolante
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Kit cursed under her breath exiting The Planet kitchen. Sharon, her head chef, had just threatened her with a frying pan if she lifted the lid to the sauce one more time. She knew Sharon had everything under control, but she could not resist double and triple checking.
The co-conspiring auntie went into her office and sat down behind her desk with a huff, mumbling that she’d give the chef space but it had better be perfect.
Checking off ‘spaghetti’ on the short list of dinner criteria Madie and Anthony had instructed Kit leaned back in her chair with a big grin. Madie had insisted the spaghetti be served on one plate and Kit couldn’t wait to see the reaction to that little detail.
The mommies had accepted the dinner invitation after Kit had prompted that no one in their right mind would turn down such a genuinely sweet offer. Kit knew she was meddling, but how could anyone resist those two babies? Besides, she reasoned, Bette had admitted falling for Anthony’s mother and the feeling looked pretty mutual as best she could tell.
Laughing to herself, Kit thought back on Madie’s party when in full-swing with the Animal Show staged for the kids. There had been plenty of cuddly animals for the kids to watch perform a trick or two then take time to pet, and all was going well with the blonde camera operator until the tarantula made the scene.
Tina had let out a squeal that startled everyone, but none more than Alice who fell backwards away from the frightened blonde and stumbled into the pool. After a shuddering jig, Tina had buried her head in the nearest shoulder, which happened to have been Bette’s.
The kids were thoroughly amused by the grown-ups’ behavior not knowing which blonde was funnier. The other parents scrambled to help Alice out of the pool while Bette stood stock-still, not knowing what to do with the frightened woman clinging to her.
Once Tina had calmed down from her arachnophobic response, she was clearly mortified by her behavior; Kit could not recall a white woman ever looking so red. The embarrassment had been so painfully apparent even Alice had tried to comfort rather than seek restitution for her saturated state.
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Oh yeah….now we’re getting on with the getting on! Thank you for your posts!!
2 more chapters tonight? LOL you spoiled us…can’t wait to read more to see how the dinner goes…will they kiss? LOL
Oh good grief – you did NOT just leave it there?! You big tease – all that tension and no release…. PPPPPPS!
Too cute. Thanks for the post!
This is the sweetest story, thanks for writing it!! Can’t wait to see what happens next : )
Damn cliffies! Thanks for this story, you truly have a gift and I’m lovin’ it. PLUS, you post regularly which I love! Can’t wait to see what happens, and how dinner goes.
Hey, good luck fixing the lawn mower! I have a feeling their dinner is going to be more interesting than mine.
Such torture! I saw your post this morning and didn’t have time to read it until now, work and all. Now I am tortured again with the cliffie. Good luck with the lawn mower. PPS!!
So cute.Thank you for this amazing chapter.PPS
First things first, PLEASE DISCONNECT the battery from the lawnmower BEFORE you attempt to change the belt. Now to our lovely story. The level of nerves they both have is too funny. It shows how much they already care about each other and too afraid to admit it. I love this story and hope that it can go on for sometime. I want to see this attraction develop into courtship, marriage and family togetherness. Hopefully one day we will see how Anthony’s $3.42 will mature into a major dividend for him and all concerned. This is such a simple love story and so sweet. Simple, because the children do not see any problems with getting them together, yet so complicated, as we adults are prone to be. Carry on.
First things first, PLEASE DISCONNECT the battery from the lawnmower BEFORE you attempt to change the belt. Now to our lovely story. The level of nerves they both have is too funny. It shows how much they already care about each other and too afraid to admit it. I love this story and hope that it can go on for sometime. I want to see this attraction develop into courtship, marriage and family togetherness. Hopefully one day we will see how Anthony’s $3.42 will mature into a major dividend for him and all concerned. This is such a simple love story and so sweet. Simple, because the children do not see any problems with getting them together, yet so complicated, as we adults are prone to be. Carry on.
You are such a tease…leaving us hanging…LOL! Nervous Tina…hysterical! C’mon now…be nice and let’s get to dinner and “spaghetti-on-one plate” moment. :)
I expected Tina to arrive in a lawn mower but she didn’t. It’s a pleasure to read whatever you write.
You know although I have read this chapter and the next before I can’t wait to see what happens :) Thank you again for this most beautiful story.
Okay. So…. that was a bad place to stop! I love Tina being nervous. Her being watched from inside was funny. I can hardly wait for more. We need more and soon please :)
Come on now sunkissed, to repair that is an easy piece for you *wink* lol.Now getting to the serious part hey lol. The two mums are sooooooooooo nervous wich means it is all good, great even. Hopefully we will get 3 more chapters tonight, won’t we sunkissed? Come on people on the site clape your hands for one kind and caring sunkissed wooeeeee. Thank you for the chapters coming pmsl.
Cute – can we start tapping our forks against our water glasses yet?… ;-)